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Heart Mind and Soul

heart i can love you with my heart pumping blood to every part what you give is such an art i pray that you do not depart mind when i love you with my mind thinking of how your so so kind i wonder how to get more time and ponder ways to keep you mine soul i also love you with my soul making you my only goal when first we met i was sold to something more precious than the finest gold

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B. Maxine Revolution

Date: 2/1/2014 7:57:00 PM

Very cute and sweet. :) Thank you for stopping by my page.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/25/2011 5:47:00 PM

Enjoyed this write today John. I am having problems with the computer and I have to go back to my comments inbox each time and bring up your name before I can go on to the next poem. Hope it is corrected soon. love phyl

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 7/16/2011 3:43:00 PM

thank you for this my love, there's something you should read...

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/8/2011 11:33:00 AM

This is really such a sweet write, John, I really like how you covered everything here, from heart to mind and ultimately to soul...& thank you for your comments in my poem, yes sad as it may seem, sometimes one gets doubts with justice...

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 7/8/2011 5:01:00 AM

John, this is a great monorhyme you have penned. A romantic tribute to your loved one. Great job of it, (as far as your comment on my poem ... no it's just a poem about what I consider to be a general scenario in today's world.) thanks for commenting. Have a great day, John

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/7/2011 10:23:00 AM

What more could I ask for today? It is a beautiful day the sun shining and birds singing. Thank you for sharing your awesome poetry with us John iii. Love, Carol