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Heart Intact

I’ll walk away with heart intact No need with blood to sign this pact When pain abounds, I need to act I will survive, now that’s a fact! No use for love, oh, can’t you see? Much happier, I'm sure to be Heart strings I've snipped, now I am free To touch the dreams that live in me I will not be a love sick fool To be abused and treated cruel When deep inside, there shines a jewel I’ll bring my heart back under rule Love shifts so much like desert sand Can’t be confined in heart or hand I need a rock on which to stand So from my heart, this love is banned YES! From my heart your love is BANNED! Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/25/2014 1:43:00 PM
My Muse is always with me, playful and testing...forgetting you is not an option woman, you are the pulse in my passion. I will have something new and savory for you to feel Friday night, after midnight Beloved Poetess...Justin
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/25/2014 2:56:00 PM
Oh....it will be so hard to wait that long....You are so sweet with these words, Justin...and I do have a sweet tooth! ;) I'll be waiting with bated breath...
Date: 9/25/2014 1:51:00 AM
A heart intact need not overreact to the fact that freedom born from love is twice as sweet as liberty through lonely struggle. The jewel in you shaped smooth and stout from courage calm, inner glow pretty as diamond snow. The message of independence, not from love but from misuse is one I have lived as well. I love the powerful way you express your resolve, and the rhyming is tight Eileen...J.A.B.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/25/2014 3:15:00 AM
Justin...I've missed your visit so much. Thank you for remembering me. I'm going through changes. I'm trying to be strong.... It isn't easy. You know me well. Your post shows that. Hope you are well, my Poet Warrior. I'm waiting anxiously to read something new. I keep checking. Hope your muse visits you soon...Hugs
Date: 4/23/2014 12:02:00 PM
Sweet poem Eileen, I love how descriptive you are here, just beautifule thank you for sharing
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Date: 3/25/2014 11:25:00 AM
A tender heart, no matter how much it is hurt, still tender and loving will remain! I feel your pain and anger and disappointment even I sense your determination to obliterate his love, BUT you cannot obliterate love from your heart because you are synonymous of love! Your poem beautiful your suffering unbearable your love though infinite!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/25/2014 11:28:00 AM
You know me so well, Demetri mou. Ti tha kano? Thank you or your lovely post. Your words bring me a sense of peace and tranquility. They make me feel...not so..stupid! Thank you, again, for passing by my way with comfort. Bless you.
Date: 3/24/2014 11:58:00 PM
Remove the clutter...expand your heartbeats. No more sweeping the specks of dust under the rug...throw the damn rug in the trash and walk again. For good.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/25/2014 10:05:00 AM
Thanks for the advice, Drake. Good to have you visit. Expanding heartbeats is not an easy thing.....
Date: 3/24/2014 4:22:00 PM
Hi Eileen. Was wondering if this is for real!! Rhyme and rhythm handled with utmost care :) // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/25/2014 10:06:00 AM
Thanks for the compliment, Paul. Lovely to have you pass by....
Date: 3/24/2014 1:30:00 PM
I love how this builds to a crescendo Eileen..Wonderful message...Hugs Tim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/25/2014 10:07:00 AM
Thanks, Tim...Crescendo, eh? Glad you liked it!
Date: 3/24/2014 9:55:00 AM
Impeccable rhythm in this heart rendering piece Eileen. You go girl! Just thought I would stop by on your work before I head off again.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/25/2014 10:08:00 AM
Thanks Mustapha....please don't be gone long.
Date: 3/24/2014 9:38:00 AM
Wow I think you mean it ! Very well written and expressive. And yes there certainly is a jewel inside ! love,Deb
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/25/2014 10:09:00 AM
:) Thanks for being so kind and sweet to me, Deb. I do appreciate it. Hugs
Date: 3/24/2014 9:20:00 AM
Great rhyming and flow. This would be a perfect anti valentines day card for disenchanted lovers. I love it.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/25/2014 10:09:00 AM
Yes, it would.
Date: 3/24/2014 5:42:00 AM
WOW---very powerful and Well written
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/24/2014 5:46:00 AM
Thank you, Jerry. Much appreciated!

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