For Unseeking Seeker's Heart gentle, eyes mindful poetry contest.
I can offer you sympathy, try to feel you through empathy. But if you take it for granted, silence will be your remedy. Remember the seeds you planted, when unnourished will bloom slanted. Hearts yearn for balanced devotion, like birds sharing what they chanted. When there is too much commotion, tears seem to fall in slow motion. Will you give my soul an embrace, try to sense its deep emotion? Ego only portrays disgrace. Some actions are hard to replace. Judgement is harshly negative. Selflessness should be your showcase. When the conscience seems tentative, your heartbeats become expletive. But if you've helped quench someone's thirst, the thoughtful become sensitive. Before the heart and soul immerse, the eyes observe compassion first. Awareness brings sweet harmony. A purpose that should be well versed.
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