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Written- 22nd May 2024
Awarded Poem of the day - 24th May 2024

 

 

Always keep space within your heart, for life's unexpected brand new starts. Quote - Poet’s own In my dream I saw an angel Hovering o’er my bed Light was gleaming from her halo Here are the words she said. “I found out your heart is troubled That you’re wishing for death I am our dear Lord’s messenger Sent down to bestow rest.” She laid her hands upon my chest Then recited prayer I felt the pain flow from my heart My mind cleared of despair. The angel flew out the window Blowing a goodbye kiss Then I slumbered on peacefully In ethereal bliss. I felt heart gentle when I woke I’m eye mindful at last Life has become spectacular Now it’s truly a blast.

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Date: 5/31/2024 3:04:00 AM
Hi Beryl , I'm thrilled to see you got POTD, how life can change, I'm so truly pleased not just for the deserved accolades or the beautiful poem you penned , but for you , especially you . Danny
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/31/2024 6:38:00 AM
Oh Daniel, that’s so nice of you, I was thrilled on having received poem of the day, it’s something that makes writing poetry worthwhile, bringing on a song and a smile… Thank you, Beryl
Date: 5/29/2024 5:49:00 AM
Oh Wow Beryl what an amazing spiritual inspirational poem!! Belated POTD Congratulations! Debx
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Date: 5/29/2024 2:51:00 PM
Thank you Deb, for the wow, congratulations and comments. Grateful Beryl x
Date: 5/27/2024 8:18:00 AM
A sweet soothing way to be soothed. Very nice, Beryl.
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Date: 5/29/2024 2:50:00 PM
Thank you very much Andrea, soothing it is to be blessed with an Angel’s kiss… Beryl
Date: 5/25/2024 9:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Beryl. This is just lovely, soothing and ultimately comforting in the knowledge that God sends life changing grace when we need it! Love your last line. Inspiring! Blessings of joy to you!
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Date: 5/29/2024 2:48:00 PM
Thank you so much Sam, I’m grateful for your comments and was delighted on having received POTD… Beryl
Date: 5/24/2024 10:42:00 PM
Such a beautiful, inspiring poem, dear Beryl. In troubled times like these, it's easy to understand people sinking into despair. We all need angels coming in to kiss our troubles away. Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD...Hugs
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Date: 5/25/2024 2:21:00 AM
Thank you for that Maria, it is easy to sink into despair, I’ve been there. Hugs in return, Beryl
Date: 5/24/2024 9:47:00 PM
Very inspirational verse Beryl, it tells us never give up on hope, greetings from Turkey. Congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Date: 5/25/2024 2:16:00 AM
Hi Tom, it’s true we should never give up hope, there’s always our heavenly host. Enjoy your time in Turkey… Beryl
Date: 5/24/2024 7:45:00 PM
It usually happens at the time you need it most, someone is there to lift your heart. So wonderful, indeed. Your thoughts caress softly around me and ' my heart. ' This is beautiful, tender and inspiring, all at the same time. Congratulations Beryl, on Poem if the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 5/25/2024 2:04:00 AM
Thank you Brandy, there are times when we need an angelic visit, in dreams it’s divine. :) Hugs sent straight back, all the best… Beryl
Date: 5/24/2024 12:29:00 PM
Lovely and angelic POTD, Beryl. A big Congratulations. Enjoy your special poetry time! Blessings :)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/25/2024 2:13:00 AM
Thank you so much Regina, yesterday was a lovely day. Blessings in return, Bery
Date: 5/24/2024 11:46:00 AM
We all need a helping hand at some point in this life Beryl, and you are right it can come totally out of the blue in our hour of need, a wonderful uplifting and deserving potd, cheers David
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Date: 5/25/2024 2:11:00 AM
True we all need a helping hand at times, when we’re down, troubled and need a friend. Thank you David, appreciated… Beryl
Date: 5/24/2024 11:15:00 AM
Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 5/25/2024 2:08:00 AM
Thank you Joseph, appreciated… Beryl
Date: 5/24/2024 9:39:00 AM
So sweet Beryl. Keep on having blast! Congratulations on the honor of POTD. :)
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Date: 5/25/2024 2:07:00 AM
Thank you Linda, I’ll certainly keep having a blast :) All the best, Beryl
Date: 5/24/2024 9:00:00 AM
Beautiful…ethereal…sweet…Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 5/25/2024 2:05:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim, truly appreciated… Beryl
Date: 5/24/2024 8:50:00 AM
Beryl, your gentle words offer soothing solace for mind and spirit. I have found that a kind caring visit in a dream to be more healing than any medicine or therapist visit. Congratulations on your POTD! All my best to you, Robert
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Date: 5/25/2024 2:00:00 AM
Thank you Robert, it’s true caring dream visits are good for you. All the best to you too… Beryl
Date: 5/24/2024 8:48:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write again. Have a blessed day with your win...............................
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/25/2024 1:58:00 AM
Thanks again Paula, pleased you enjoyed reading this poem twice over. Blessings to you too and have a nice day… Beryl
Date: 5/24/2024 8:44:00 AM
Enjoyed this beautiful potd with a great quote! Congratulations Beryl!
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Date: 5/25/2024 1:56:00 AM
Thank you very much Karen, pleased you enjoyed the read… Beryl
Date: 5/24/2024 8:12:00 AM
Nice quote before your poem, Beryl. Your poem is comforting and inspiring. Congratulations on your POTD honor, my friend! Enjoy your special day of recognition. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 5/25/2024 1:55:00 AM
Bill, somehow some replies fly away, I did answer you earlier, thank you poet friend, I enjoyed my special day. Hugs sent to you and Sara… Beryl
Date: 5/24/2024 7:10:00 AM
Beryl, congratulations on POTD. What a beautiful dream~ Warren
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Date: 5/24/2024 7:55:00 AM
Thank you so Warren, I appreciate that very much… Beryl
Date: 5/24/2024 7:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Beryl. I read that Angels who hover around someone implies that they are so interested in that person that all they want to do is be in their presence. That, it seems, is how the angels feel about certain people. The passage makes this clear by saying that they “hover lovingly.” The goal is reached, "I slumbered peacefully" Peaceful & touching. Enjoy your day!
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Date: 5/24/2024 7:53:00 AM
Hi Anaya, I believe angels know when you need them, for whatever reason, soothing our torment away. Thank you, Beryl
Date: 5/24/2024 6:26:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Beryl. Nice poem. I love short poems.
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Date: 5/24/2024 7:37:00 AM
Thank you for the congratulations Jay, pleased you liked the poem… Beryl
Date: 5/24/2024 5:11:00 AM
Dear Beryl, Congratulations on your POTD—it was so well deserved and cheered. Reading your poem, I felt that I should always keep space in my heart for new beginnings. The imagery of the angel and the sense of peace it brought is beautifully moving. Your words have a profound healing touch, much like the angel in your dream. YEAH!! Wonderful Poem, Beryl! - Blessings, my Friend, Daniel
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/24/2024 7:00:00 AM
Thank you poet pal Daniel, no matter what’s going on in your heart every new day gives one a new start. Blessings in return… Beryl
Date: 5/24/2024 4:51:00 AM
BIG congrats on POTD, Beryl. A peaceful, angelic voice to your poem. Enjoy your special day today.
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Date: 5/24/2024 6:55:00 AM
Thank you Vijay, I’m truly enjoying my day…Beryl
Date: 5/24/2024 3:54:00 AM
Beryl, a wonderful poem, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 5/24/2024 4:25:00 AM
Thank you Tania, very grateful… Beryl
Date: 5/24/2024 3:22:00 AM
Congrats on your POTD! Great work Beryl.
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Date: 5/24/2024 4:25:00 AM
Thank you very much Randy, appreciated… Beryl
Date: 5/24/2024 2:34:00 AM
returning to congratulate you on your POTD distinction for this lovely poem. Well deserved, Beryl!
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Date: 5/24/2024 3:19:00 AM
Thank you again Sara, what a delight it was to see I’d received poem of the day, such a joy… Beryl
Date: 5/24/2024 2:13:00 AM
- Your chosen angels stay with you and watch over you, comfort you and love you, Beryl :) - A wonderful poem, congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
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Date: 5/24/2024 3:16:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise, I’m sure angels watch over us all, with love and comfort too. I’m thrilled with having received poem of the day… Beryl
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