Beryl Edmonds Poet Rhyme

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Written- 22nd May 2024

Awarded Poem of the day - 24th May 2024

 

 

Heart Gentle Eye Mindful

Always keep space within your heart, 
for life's unexpected brand new starts.
Quote - Poet’s own 

In my dream I saw an angel
Hovering o’er my bed
Light was gleaming from her halo
Here are the words she said.

“I found out your heart is troubled
That you’re wishing for deathly
I am our dear Lord’s messenger
Sent down to bestow rest.”

She laid her hands upon my chest
Then recited prayer
I felt the pain flow from my heart
My mind cleared of despair.

The angel flew out the window
Blowing a goodbye kiss
Then I slumbered on peacefully 
In ethereal bliss.

I felt heart gentle when I woke
I’m eye mindful at last
Life has become spectacular
Now it’s truly a blast.

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Deb M May 29, 2024 at 5:49 AM Oh Wow Beryl what an amazing spiritual inspirational poem!! Belated POTD Congratulations! Debx Beryl Edmonds May 29, 2024 at 2:51 PM Thank you Deb, for the wow, congratulations and comments. Grateful Beryl x

Andrea Dietrich May 27, 2024 at 8:18 AM A sweet soothing way to be soothed. Very nice, Beryl. Beryl Edmonds May 29, 2024 at 2:50 PM Thank you very much Andrea, soothing it is to be blessed with an Angel’s kiss… Beryl

Sam Kauffman May 25, 2024 at 9:39 AM Congratulations on your POTD, Beryl. This is just lovely, soothing and ultimately comforting in the knowledge that God sends life changing grace when we need it! Love your last line. Inspiring! Blessings of joy to you! Beryl Edmonds May 29, 2024 at 2:48 PM Thank you so much Sam, I’m grateful for your comments and was delighted on having received POTD… Beryl

Maria Williams May 24, 2024 at 10:42 PM Such a beautiful, inspiring poem, dear Beryl. In troubled times like these, it's easy to understand people sinking into despair. We all need angels coming in to kiss our troubles away. Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD...Hugs Beryl Edmonds May 25, 2024 at 2:21 AM Thank you for that Maria, it is easy to sink into despair, I’ve been there. Hugs in return, Beryl

Tom Cunningham May 24, 2024 at 9:47 PM Very inspirational verse Beryl, it tells us never give up on hope, greetings from Turkey. Congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom Beryl Edmonds May 25, 2024 at 2:16 AM Hi Tom, it’s true we should never give up hope, there’s always our heavenly host. Enjoy your time in Turkey… Beryl

Brandy Nicole May 24, 2024 at 7:45 PM It usually happens at the time you need it most, someone is there to lift your heart. So wonderful, indeed. Your thoughts caress softly around me and ' my heart. ' This is beautiful, tender and inspiring, all at the same time. Congratulations Beryl, on Poem if the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy Beryl Edmonds May 25, 2024 at 2:04 AM Thank you Brandy, there are times when we need an angelic visit, in dreams it’s divine. :) Hugs sent straight back, all the best… Beryl

Regina Elliott May 24, 2024 at 12:29 PM Lovely and angelic POTD, Beryl. A big Congratulations. Enjoy your special poetry time! Blessings :) Beryl Edmonds May 25, 2024 at 2:13 AM Thank you so much Regina, yesterday was a lovely day. Blessings in return, Bery

David Kavanagh May 24, 2024 at 11:46 AM We all need a helping hand at some point in this life Beryl, and you are right it can come totally out of the blue in our hour of need, a wonderful uplifting and deserving potd, cheers David Beryl Edmonds May 25, 2024 at 2:11 AM True we all need a helping hand at times, when we’re down, troubled and need a friend. Thank you David, appreciated… Beryl

Joseph May May 24, 2024 at 11:15 AM Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD Beryl Edmonds May 25, 2024 at 2:08 AM Thank you Joseph, appreciated… Beryl

Linda Alice Fowler May 24, 2024 at 9:39 AM So sweet Beryl. Keep on having blast! Congratulations on the honor of POTD. :) Beryl Edmonds May 25, 2024 at 2:07 AM Thank you Linda, I’ll certainly keep having a blast :) All the best, Beryl

Kim Rodrigues May 24, 2024 at 9:00 AM Beautiful…ethereal…sweet…Congrats on POTD! Beryl Edmonds May 25, 2024 at 2:05 AM Thank you so much Kim, truly appreciated… Beryl

Robert Gorelick May 24, 2024 at 8:50 AM Beryl, your gentle words offer soothing solace for mind and spirit. I have found that a kind caring visit in a dream to be more healing than any medicine or therapist visit. Congratulations on your POTD! All my best to you, Robert Beryl Edmonds May 25, 2024 at 2:00 AM Thank you Robert, it’s true caring dream visits are good for you. All the best to you too… Beryl

Paula Goldsmith May 24, 2024 at 8:48 AM Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write again. Have a blessed day with your win............................... Beryl Edmonds May 25, 2024 at 1:58 AM Thanks again Paula, pleased you enjoyed reading this poem twice over. Blessings to you too and have a nice day… Beryl

Karen Jones May 24, 2024 at 8:44 AM Enjoyed this beautiful potd with a great quote! Congratulations Beryl! Beryl Edmonds May 25, 2024 at 1:56 AM Thank you very much Karen, pleased you enjoyed the read… Beryl

Bill Baker May 24, 2024 at 8:12 AM Nice quote before your poem, Beryl. Your poem is comforting and inspiring. Congratulations on your POTD honor, my friend! Enjoy your special day of recognition. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Beryl Edmonds May 25, 2024 at 1:55 AM Bill, somehow some replies fly away, I did answer you earlier, thank you poet friend, I enjoyed my special day. Hugs sent to you and Sara… Beryl

Warren Doll May 24, 2024 at 7:10 AM Beryl, congratulations on POTD. What a beautiful dream~ Warren Beryl Edmonds May 24, 2024 at 7:55 AM Thank you so Warren, I appreciate that very much… Beryl

I Am Anaya May 24, 2024 at 7:05 AM Congratulations on your POTD, Beryl. I read that Angels who hover around someone implies that they are so interested in that person that all they want to do is be in their presence. That, it seems, is how the angels feel about certain people. The passage makes this clear by saying that they “hover lovingly.” The goal is reached, "I slumbered peacefully" Peaceful & touching. Enjoy your day! Beryl Edmonds May 24, 2024 at 7:53 AM Hi Anaya, I believe angels know when you need them, for whatever reason, soothing our torment away. Thank you, Beryl

Jay Narain May 24, 2024 at 6:26 AM Congratulations on POTD, Beryl. Nice poem. I love short poems. Beryl Edmonds May 24, 2024 at 7:37 AM Thank you for the congratulations Jay, pleased you liked the poem… Beryl

Daniel Henry Rodgers May 24, 2024 at 5:11 AM Dear Beryl, Congratulations on your POTD—it was so well deserved and cheered. Reading your poem, I felt that I should always keep space in my heart for new beginnings. The imagery of the angel and the sense of peace it brought is beautifully moving. Your words have a profound healing touch, much like the angel in your dream. YEAH!! Wonderful Poem, Beryl! - Blessings, my Friend, Daniel Beryl Edmonds May 24, 2024 at 7:00 AM Thank you poet pal Daniel, no matter what’s going on in your heart every new day gives one a new start. Blessings in return… Beryl

Vijay Pandit May 24, 2024 at 4:51 AM BIG congrats on POTD, Beryl. A peaceful, angelic voice to your poem. Enjoy your special day today. Beryl Edmonds May 24, 2024 at 6:55 AM Thank you Vijay, I’m truly enjoying my day…Beryl

Tania Kitchin May 24, 2024 at 3:54 AM Beryl, a wonderful poem, congratulations on POTD. Beryl Edmonds May 24, 2024 at 4:25 AM Thank you Tania, very grateful… Beryl

Randy Freie May 24, 2024 at 3:22 AM Congrats on your POTD! Great work Beryl. Beryl Edmonds May 24, 2024 at 4:25 AM Thank you very much Randy, appreciated… Beryl

Anne-Lise Andresen May 24, 2024 at 2:13 AM - Your chosen angels stay with you and watch over you, comfort you and love you, Beryl :) - A wonderful poem, congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs Beryl Edmonds May 24, 2024 at 3:16 AM Thank you Anne-Lise, I’m sure angels watch over us all, with love and comfort too. I’m thrilled with having received poem of the day… Beryl

Maria Fernandez-Garcia May 24, 2024 at 1:58 AM How beautiful poignatant rhyme poem...! Really delicious for reading. Many Congratulations on the POTD dear Beryl, which is very well deserved. Enjoy your awarded day my friend! Beryl Edmonds May 24, 2024 at 2:08 AM Thank you very much Maria, this came as such a surprise I will enjoy my awarded day dear friend… Beryl

Christina Bowring May 24, 2024 at 1:49 AM Dear Beryl, many congratulations on this beautiful POTD. Loved the poem and I loved the quote as well of which I’m going to remember. Such lovely flowing lines. The last stanza is full of hope and so inspiring. A very uplifting, engaging poem. So enjoyed reading it today. Thank you for sharing. Enjoy your celebratory day with blessings xx Beryl Edmonds May 24, 2024 at 2:06 AM Thank you so much Christina, your words mean a lot, I will enjoy the day I’m so thrilled to have received poem of the day… Blessings returned… Beryl xx

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