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Heart Broken

ages past as man walked in darkness - God silent turned away - heart broken ~*~ * * * * * #9 in the series of 24 Monokus reflecting the holy season of Christmas! * * * * * * * * * *

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Jack Horne

Date: 11/3/2013 11:06:00 AM

love this thought provoking write, my friend x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/15/2010 8:47:00 PM

Yes, I am sure it breaks God's heart to see many things gone wrong!

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/15/2010 3:43:00 PM

he won't be turning away this time. john

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/15/2010 5:11:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup Audrey. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)

Chelsea Stufleben

Date: 12/14/2010 2:44:00 PM

could you help explain to me how a monoku works?yours sounds very nice but i have no idea what this is constructed of.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/14/2010 2:01:00 PM

Devotional spiritual thoughts you have penned in this season, Audrey

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/14/2010 12:50:00 PM

Thank goodness Jesus brought God's light into our lives again, Audrey. So thought-provoking! I could read all of these and still clamor for more. Love and blessings to you, my dear. Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/14/2010 10:22:00 AM

lovely write, audrey.. got more?? hugggs, nette

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/14/2010 9:22:00 AM

Nice expressions Audrey,excellent Monoku...Happy Holidays with love Michael