Heart Beating Wow

"I loved her since the day I met her" by _Poet I miss her much more now each and every day She was my love in every which way She walks her own lone path now Wiped me from her brow Beating here Wow Beating there Memories do bow In many ways I know how So many words I wish to just say I miss her much more now each and every day
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Elliott Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 5:55 AM
Belated Congratulations on this both lovely and sad poem, Robert. Thank you so much for awarding me 3rd place podium in your "Life" contest. I'm deeply honored. Have a blessed week. ~
Kendrick Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 12:43 PM
Congratulations on this winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing..Sara
Liguori Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 1:24 PM
Thank you Sara!
La France Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 6:52 AM
Robert, wonderful poem of lost love and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge, Andaree form, well done, I like your quote and congratulations also on receiving the POTD, Constance
Liguori Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 1:24 PM
Thanks Constance!
Messina Avatar
January 29, 2023 at 5:23 AM
Great writing, Robert. Broken hearts take time to heal. Belated Congrats on POTD! Charlie
Liguori Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 1:24 PM
Thank you Charles!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 27, 2023 at 8:49 PM
Great poem, Robert! Congratulations on POTD!
Liguori Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 1:23 PM
Thank you Kim!
Fowler Avatar
January 26, 2023 at 8:41 AM
Sweetly romantic Robert Congratulations on your win! :)
Liguori Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 1:23 PM
Thank you Linda!
Pickett Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 11:19 PM
This rhyme is reminiscent of the Palindrome form. Not going to lie I had to look at the Palindrome I wrote as reference because I thought this may have been that as opposed to rhyme. I like this poem! Well worth the featured poem of the day. Well done man! Did you get a high ranking CLF's contest? If not I need to read which poems beat you!! Much love Asavvy1
Liguori Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 1:23 PM
Thank you Jared!
Tor Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 4:25 PM
Congratulations Robert...
Liguori Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 1:23 PM
Thank you Michael!
Gorelick Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 4:11 PM
Congratulations on your POTD! You deserve better anyway Robert! Robert
Liguori Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 1:23 PM
Thank you Robert!
Anaya Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 2:36 PM
Love's messy, Cupid left when most needed. Let's hope he strikes again! Congratulations on POTD Robert Liquori! I Am Anaya
Liguori Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 1:22 PM
Thank you Anaya!
Roper Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 2:26 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Robert.
Liguori Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 1:22 PM
Thank you Eve!
Kitchin Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 2:18 PM
Robert, congratulations on POTD, well done!
Liguori Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 1:22 PM
Thank you Tania!
Volumes Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 1:36 PM
Back to say Congrats Robert, So glad they gave this wonderful poem POTD.
Liguori Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 1:22 PM
Thank you Wendy!
Parker Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 12:30 PM
Sad tale told well, Mr. RJL. POTD indeed! ~;o]
Liguori Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 1:15 PM
Thank you Arlo!
Nicole Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 11:43 AM
When a heart has been on an up an down roller-coaster of emotions, it can be difficult to find the right words. Still- you know how you feel. This is so beautifully written and presented. Congratulations Robert, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Liguori Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 1:16 PM
A broken heart is hard to mend!
Romios Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 10:13 AM
A lovely poem!! Congratulations on POTD! Panagiota
Liguori Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 1:16 PM
Thank you Panagiota!
Baker Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 8:44 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Robert! Fine entry for the contest. Good Luck! Enjoy your special day. Bill
Liguori Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 1:16 PM
Thanks Bill.
Delaney Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 8:21 AM
Congratulations Roy on a perfect Andaree. Best, SuZ
Liguori Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 1:16 PM
Thanks, it took some time to get the Andaree right!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 6:34 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A lovely write. Have a blessed day writing away..............
Liguori Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 1:17 PM
Thank you Paula.
Fowler Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 5:35 AM
Congratulations on the honor of your POTD Robert. :)
Liguori Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 1:17 PM
Thanks Linda!
Sands Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 5:25 AM
Congratulations for POTD . Enjoy :)
Liguori Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 1:17 PM
Thank you Heidi!
Meadows Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 3:22 AM
A good poem. Congratulations on your POTD.
Liguori Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 1:17 PM
Thanks Jeanette!
Andresen Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 2:42 AM
- A lovely and romantic p.o.t.d., congratulations, Robert :) -
Liguori Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 1:17 PM
Thanks! Sunshine!
M  Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 12:53 AM
Congratulations Robert for POTD….a beautiful poem from the heart! Debx
Liguori Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 1:18 PM
It was from my heart! Thank you Deb!
Volumes Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 4:25 PM
Really lovely poem Robert. You nailed the Andaree perfectly. A favourte for me .
Liguori Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 1:18 PM
A favorite! Wow! Thanks Wendy!!!
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