Heart and Brain

My father’s death was from his heart,
My mother’s from her brain
And so I wonder which, for me,
Might just be on the wane.

Of course, there is no guarantee
That I will follow suit,
For in the future, we all know
There is no absolute.

So far, my heart is ticking fine
And even with some quirks,
My brain, despite some CRS,*
Apparently still works.

*Can’t remember spit (or its rhyming improvement)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Wolf Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 8:42 PM
'Can't remember spit:' What a classic! I shall invoke your name whenever I use this three-word phrase --- which will probably be oftener and ... What am I writing about now? Oh, CRS! Thanks, Ilene!
Bayles Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 10:00 AM
A haunting poem, but I'm glad you're doing all right.
Greenhough Avatar
May 11, 2024 at 11:19 AM
I also worry about those heredity traits that can surface at anytime. Your poem is a very good dissertation on reasons to adhere to healthful lifestyles. Thank you for your poems.
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May 10, 2024 at 2:46 PM
Hehe…love it Ilene! Very witty! Debx
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