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Heart and Brain

My father’s death was from his heart, My mother’s from her brain And so I wonder which, for me, Might just be on the wane. Of course, there is no guarantee That I will follow suit, For in the future, we all know There is no absolute. So far, my heart is ticking fine And even with some quirks, My brain, despite some CRS,* Apparently still works. *Can’t remember spit (or its rhyming improvement)

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Date: 5/14/2024 8:42:00 PM
'Can't remember spit:' What a classic! I shall invoke your name whenever I use this three-word phrase --- which will probably be oftener and ... What am I writing about now? Oh, CRS! Thanks, Ilene!
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Date: 5/12/2024 10:00:00 AM
A haunting poem, but I'm glad you're doing all right.
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Date: 5/11/2024 11:19:00 AM
I also worry about those heredity traits that can surface at anytime. Your poem is a very good dissertation on reasons to adhere to healthful lifestyles. Thank you for your poems.
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Date: 5/10/2024 2:46:00 PM
Hehe…love it Ilene! Very witty! Debx
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