Heart

H arrowing muscle! forcing passion on my soul. E ver-present beating - a metronome of feeling. A rduous yet wonderful, fickle yet insistent. R acing with adrenaline - Swinging, jumping, screaming! - T ill it stops... and all is silent and unfeeling. For Rick's "Any 5 Line Poem" contest Placed: 4th

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Painted Hunter

Date: 4/10/2013 6:32:00 AM

Heather, you caught me...I'm Canadian...haha. No, not really. Great beat to this acrostic!...which is fitting since it's about your heart. Never stop beating!

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 2/28/2013 8:08:00 AM

Wow, this one really makes an impression on me! Awesome the way you wrote it, with all the contrast and feeling put into the poem itself.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/8/2013 1:17:00 PM

Great acrostic..Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Debbie Duncan

Date: 12/27/2012 10:30:00 PM

very nicely done Heather, and awesome win ;} Happy New Year ;}

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2012 5:29:00 AM

Good morning, Heather,, A nice warm congratulations for the very nice win in Rick's "Any 5 Line Poem" Wishing you the best holidays to come. Merry Christmas and a happy new year. Love~LINDA

Yvette Lisa Ndlovu

Date: 12/24/2012 3:51:00 AM

Wow this is brilliant, it has so much heart! congrats on win:)

Richard Palmer

Date: 12/23/2012 2:02:00 PM

keep ticking,you have a lot of great to offer to the world,wonderful write Heather and have a HAPPY HOLIDAY

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/23/2012 1:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning spot Heather, hope it's still ticking love xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/22/2012 5:25:00 PM

I sure remember this HEART FELT poem!!! BIG congrats on your well deserved win.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/22/2012 2:58:00 PM

Full of energy and movement, this acrostic rocks!!! Congrats on a well-deserving win! Merry Christmas, gwendolen

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/22/2012 1:34:00 PM

Way to go Heather, this is very clever. I enjoyed it with all my heart.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2012 6:17:00 PM

I think I don't have a chance in the contest with ones like these that I am seeing. REAlly creative! btw, thanks for your comment on my newest terzanelle but I had failed to include enough stanzas and quickly had to come up with a new one. whewwww.

Rollo West

Date: 12/20/2012 10:49:00 AM

Hi Heather, what a great Acrostic this is, enjoyed it very much, good luck in the contest. Rollo

David Williams

Date: 12/20/2012 10:32:00 AM

Heather very well done, I like,..David

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/20/2012 10:30:00 AM

lets hope it doesn't stop soon . Heather xx