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heart monitor on peach jam on toast for breakfast.... drip

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/10/2023 10:58:00 AM

A host of images in a small container

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/10/2023 1:15:00 PM

Kim, I guess there will be a host of something in that monitor. I am thinking maybe it is like a small EKG but only recording when things are not going well. Thanks for leaving such a nice review of my work. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2023 4:25:00 PM

wow. great juxtaposition there.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/9/2023 2:11:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. It is a sticky one at least. Sara

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 8/7/2023 4:26:00 AM

Beautiful haiku, Sara. As most of your poetry. I like the peach jam on the toast, but not the heart monitor. Anyway, sometimes are necessary. Hope you are ok?. Thank you Sara..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/7/2023 4:46:00 AM

Thank you for the hopes, Maria. I feel fine right this minute, but we never know when our time will come, and the heart monitor won't stop our time. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/7/2023 4:13:00 AM

- A hearty and sweet breakfast, Sara - Have a wonderful week ... hope you are well :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/7/2023 4:44:00 AM

Yes, just a little tad of sugar in the morning. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 8/6/2023 4:39:00 PM

I hope you are well Sara, the toast and jam sounds delicious, I hope the heart monitor has only good reports to share if this poem is any indication of reality!! Be well dear Sara!! <3

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/7/2023 4:39:00 AM

I hope the dripping jam did not mess up the heart monitor, BJ. I won't know until about 6 weeks, but I take the monitor back and turn it in this Wednesday. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Joseph May

Date: 8/6/2023 1:14:00 PM

Juxtaposing the desire for sweets with the ensuing health issues, Nicely done Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/7/2023 4:32:00 AM

Good reasoning on your part, Joseph. Yes, I do like my spoon of homemade preserves on toast, bagel or biscuit at breakfast. No necessity good for me being I am slightly diabetic. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Brian Sambourne

Date: 8/6/2023 12:11:00 PM

Very creative Sara. I really like the way you've linked a high fat intake with heart issues (at least that's my take on your imaginative Senryu). Terrific work! Brian

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/7/2023 4:15:00 AM

Brian, almost on track. I was born with a hole in my heart then developed a tumor in there a few years back which has been treated with meds, but now problems with arrythmia once again and having to get it checked out. So far, I know I have two leaky valves in addition to previous problems. Sara