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Heart-Less

I once had a bold Valentine
who took me out daily to dine
he fed me cold beans
and now in my dreams
I gas him for wasting my time!

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/16/2012 11:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "A Valentine Limerick" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/15/2012 7:11:00 PM

Oh those beans...lol....congrats BG

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 4/14/2012 9:19:00 AM

Ha, ha...this was a blast to read....congrats on your win : )

Joann Grisetti

Date: 4/14/2012 7:38:00 AM

You really made me laugh with this clever limerick. Congratulations.

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/14/2012 6:40:00 AM

LMBO!!! Oh Debbie this is too funny!! You did awsome with this...meter and everything...I'm still laughing... :D :D Congratulations!! Got to fav it!! Big hugs--love deb

Joseph May

Date: 4/14/2012 5:50:00 AM

congrats on your win Debbie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/13/2012 10:29:00 PM

DG~wow,,, this one is a late one... a super and wonderful congratulations.. with your valentine limerick * good night. :-) always~ PD

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/13/2012 10:26:00 PM

congrats on another wonderful win Debbie ..luv..

Maxeen Dennis

Date: 1/31/2012 9:15:00 PM

Funny, like it! I want to thank you, for your poetry because I am learning a lot about the different forms.

Don Johnson

Date: 1/20/2012 4:59:00 PM

hot air is what i mist, syllables don't get as crisp, less yer hanging by hand of wrist, but the great fall from cliff is inviting:)

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 1/20/2012 4:47:00 PM

Lol, love it Debbie. Elizabeth

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/20/2012 1:18:00 PM

I've sent soup mail, Debbie..!

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/20/2012 12:55:00 PM

I must say if you don't mind i think this is one "blast of a write" Debbie, real fun piece..) the only danger from this type of write is there may be others who will try to "repeat its heated content" if they do..! we should all pour cold beans on them...! "ha ha"

Lucinda Cayton

Date: 1/20/2012 8:35:00 AM

tin mcgraw song. living on em daily? hard to understand reasoning, love is love, take good care and God Bless you, Lucinda "Cindy" Lu Cayton author and joker