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When symphonic waves crash on soundless shores, Listen to the cadence of silent seas, He's a virtuoso of voiceless woes, orchestrating pre-written faith, at ease. For every tainted tide, transpires a tune, If you lend your ear to the unsung sighs, perhaps sonorous currents too would croon, amidst ringing reasons that fall and rise. There's a fine song for every shipwrecked heart, entrenched in rhymes from the soul of sand dunes. Healing comes through searing sirens as art, rhapsodizing themes of roaring runes. As waters whistle, hushed air ricochets, resonating the melody of a dulcet dove, breeze beneath ripples rewinds and replays, in divine dialects through language of love. Whilst chorus of crickets swiftly unfold, allow nature to compose musings of the ocean. Words can only whisper deep scars untold, in poetic crescendo, that translates intense emotions.

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Date: 9/15/2023 3:38:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in Lasaad's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 9/13/2023 11:47:00 AM
Dear friend INK, I am truly delighted to offer my sincere congratulations for your well-earned win in my contest. Your poetry is truly awe-inspiring, as you express your ideas with remarkable accuracy and grace. Your diction is of top caliber as well.
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/13/2023 12:24:00 PM
Thank you so very much for the acknowledgment, this means alot coming from you, and was definitely challenging to do, but im so happy it turned out well. Grateful for the experience and your kind thoughts on the poem and for being placed 1st in your contest is truly an honour. Appreciate you always being so supportive
Date: 9/10/2023 1:24:00 AM
I can see why this is so popular. A dreamy use of language (as always from you).. the killer line for me "There's a fine song for every shipwrecked heart". Would love to hear the vocal on this piece. Great job!
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Date: 9/13/2023 12:23:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind and generous support truly grateful
Date: 9/9/2023 3:17:00 AM
I have just listened to your words before reading them! and I lent my heart to your melodious rhymes, dear Empress! There's always a "fine song " that fits in and resonates with a thirsty soul who is passionate about a unique poetry! Your "language of love " is beyond translation as your emotive poem flows spontaneously into the heart! What a pleasure reading your Rhyme! God bless your beautiful soul.
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Date: 9/9/2023 3:25:00 AM
Thank you so much truly poetic soul. Your comments are as poetic as your poems and the way you grasp every detail when leaving your thoughts is so soul warming to read. Appreciate you being here and your support wholeheartedly
Date: 9/8/2023 6:27:00 PM
Superb use of vivid figures of speech and symbols, Ink Empress. Janice
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/9/2023 3:24:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind support
Date: 9/8/2023 6:21:00 AM
Hello IE. I'm reminded of Homer's Odyssey in your lines, and the plights Odysseus had to overcome to regain his home and life. He, too shipwrecked, literally, and suffered emotional heartache for years. You use an appropriate amount of alliteration that I recognize from your mentor's way of writing. It's a nice touch.
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Date: 9/8/2023 9:37:00 AM
This is such an insightful and profound comment, thank you so very much for visiting and for sharing your thoughts. I will definitely read Homer’s Odyssey. Sounds interesting. Awwn thank you yes silent one is the king of alliterations, he would not like me saying this but i can never be evn close to his poetic skills. I appreciate your heartfelt feedback thank u again dear kind poetess , look forward to reading you too
Date: 9/7/2023 12:27:00 PM
I love how you made it all about the ocean and used such elegant language and images. Very beautiful.
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Date: 9/8/2023 2:27:00 AM
This means alot thank you so very much truly
Date: 9/6/2023 8:33:00 PM
The harmonious lines is a glistening wave of emotions, and the rhyme and rhythm of this poem has moved me. I can hear your words sing in the wind, this is truly a beautiful piece. In love!
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Date: 9/7/2023 9:40:00 PM
I wouldn't be writing if it wasn't for you, and I love your poetry. Thank you for your help and heads up on where to find things here!
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Date: 9/6/2023 10:42:00 PM
My beautiful island poetess, i am so happy to see you here constantly showering my poems with love, thank you for being so supportive and for joining soup too. So happy to have you truly. I have a contest up right now here , hope to see you write for that, if you go on “ contests” ull see the prompt. Sending you light always
Date: 9/6/2023 7:02:00 PM
Oh wow! What an exquisite write, enjoyed every line of this beautiful work. Thanks for sharing, IE
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Date: 9/6/2023 10:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, appreciate your support
Date: 9/6/2023 9:31:00 AM
You have encompassed all the most wonderful sounds in creation and wrapped them in a veil of an enticingly melodious poem. A sheer pleasure to read. Thank you. I really don't think you need luck for this one. Best wishes from SV
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Date: 9/6/2023 10:37:00 AM
Oh wow thank you kind soul, you are so supportive, I appreciate you saying this, it wasnt easy focusin on one sense but i challenged myself to do this one. So pleased to know you think this is good enough: appreciate youuu
Date: 9/6/2023 8:11:00 AM
My beautiful soul sis! I’m so glad I found you!
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Date: 9/6/2023 10:44:00 PM
Oh kingy if you scroll up youll see another one too :D
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Date: 9/6/2023 5:04:00 PM
Another one? PS is undergoing a revolution!
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Date: 9/6/2023 8:12:00 AM
Omg yesss finally we are connected my beautiful soul sis , thank u for joining soup here with me . Always and forever connected cosmically to you,
Date: 9/6/2023 7:33:00 AM
There's a fine song for every shipwrecked heart, entrenched in rhymes from the soul of sand dunes.--eloquent voice to your poem throughout Ink. Impressive, as ever, a treat for the reader!
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Date: 9/6/2023 8:18:00 AM
Thank you so much for making soup a pleasant place for me . Appreciate ur support
Date: 9/6/2023 6:07:00 AM
My friend there are so many awesome verses in this gem! It is a poet's feast to read this beauty. All stanza are great but this one especially. "" Whilst chorus of crickets swiftly unfold, allow nature to compose musings of the ocean. Words can only whisper deep scars untold, in poetic crescendo, that translates intense emotions."" A gem and a new fav too. God bless you.
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Date: 9/6/2023 6:30:00 AM
Thank you so very much, this means alot coming from a brilliant poet like you. Appreciate your generous feedback truly
Date: 9/6/2023 5:31:00 AM
"There's a fine song for every shipwrecked heart". "Allow nature to compose musings of the ocean". Such awesome lines and reminds me a bit of my haibun, Mountain Serenade. Being in nature and meditation can help us heal. This younger generation wants to sit all day behind a game console. Makes me sad and is worrisome
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Date: 9/6/2023 5:55:00 AM
Oh wow kingy thank u so much, u are so kind, i wrote this for “ hearing” contest , i was supposed to only use hearing sense, so went with that was hard as u know i always use colors hah. Yes so true many are into gaming and technology unfortunately. Sad reality.
Date: 9/6/2023 5:01:00 AM
Wow wow, my dearest Ink, the way you've unveiled a serenading symphony of different nature's sounds, oscillating between breezes, oceanic waves, sirens, tides, silent seas, melody of doves, chorus of crickets.. Ah, you've actually impeccably extracted the essence of the sense 'Hearing' here and taken it to the beautiful note of 'Healing'.. There's so much wisdom and emotions that you've poured in this one.."If you lend your ear to the unsung sighs" If only people understood our silence..Heartfelt
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Date: 9/6/2023 5:53:00 AM
Wow u actually for a minute made me believe this came out well hah! U are so kind and generous always so grateful for u my lil angelic star
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/6/2023 5:32:00 AM
Nice comment Hiya
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/6/2023 5:04:00 AM
"As waters whistle, hushed air ricochets" I always love that word 'ricochet'! "Words can only whisper deep scars untold" Wow.. "Ringing reasons that fall and rose" Amazingly written.. I can definitely feel your beautiful oceanic and mermaid heart here.. Keep writing and inspiring us.. -always!
Date: 9/6/2023 4:22:00 AM
I love thé Line “as Waters whistle hushed air ricochets” unique and well written as always . You are a great poet . Inspired by the best . ??
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Date: 9/6/2023 5:52:00 AM
Haha mentored u mean, silent one yes thank u so much
Date: 9/6/2023 4:11:00 AM
Wonderful write and entry for the contest. I love it. God bless you with a win. Much love, Gina
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Date: 9/6/2023 5:52:00 AM
Thank u always
Date: 9/6/2023 3:52:00 AM
I read then I was hearing the words the things mintioned. I went with the flow.
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Date: 9/6/2023 5:52:00 AM
Ah thank u so much
Date: 9/6/2023 3:12:00 AM
- "deep scars untold ... ringing reasons that fall and rise" ... "of voiceless woes" ... find deep meanings in your lovely poem - Best wishes in the contest, dear Ink :) - hugs
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Date: 9/6/2023 5:52:00 AM
I appreciate you dear Anne Lise, i am so glad you liked it thank you so muchhhh
Date: 9/6/2023 1:37:00 AM
Mmm soundless shores… love that vibe ! There is a fine song for every shipwreck heart!!! Yesss mine is let it go from frozen ????…water whistles,hushed air ricochet.. mmmmm eerie!… words can only whisper deep scars untold … my goodness that hit different … gorgeous piece Papi?
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Date: 9/6/2023 1:41:00 AM
Oh my lionness papi! So good to see you too on soup. Thank you so much for reading and leaving your thoughts

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