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Hear Her Screams

none of us will see the next century none of us will see the next dimension why should we care? but they feel it the empaths, the watchers, the light, of creation its coming, change on broken wings, it flies past as the world peels off her layers. she reveals herself to be in torment and we parasites go about our everyday life ignoring her screams for our mercy so if I the poet? can draw attention to her plight I will scream I will curse I will burn effigy of every god known to man its time to notice its time to take action So I scream a thousand poems and cry a million tears until the wash of my sound can be heard

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/11/2010 5:28:00 AM
this is one powerful peace here Jayne, thank you again [Duncan]
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Date: 10/10/2010 6:19:00 AM
All poets need to speak on this. vry nicly done.... Oh my formats getting better I know how to separate the lines now .lol
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Date: 10/6/2010 5:02:00 PM
Moving and deeply felt, Jayne. I read this again which I don't do that often. I really like this. A keeper. Regards from Gerard.
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Date: 10/5/2010 2:56:00 AM
HI Jayne...thank you so much for the awesome comment on my poem, very appreciated! and even more stoked if i have inspired another poem from it. thank you again...one love.....Dom
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Date: 10/4/2010 3:02:00 PM
brilliant i would agree. and with a point to which we can all agree. john
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Date: 10/4/2010 2:13:00 PM
A brilliant poem,and the words should make all stop and think.Thank you for your comments they are appreciated.
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Date: 10/4/2010 10:23:00 AM
From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Jayne. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/4/2010 7:44:00 AM
Yes Jayne ..we all need to bring the message home ..this is an excellent piece and emphatically stated is every line... bringing attention through poetry and tears ..brilliant..luv..
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Date: 10/4/2010 5:11:00 AM
Thanks, Jane, for caring enough to scream. I like to think that I, too, scream in my own quiet little way every time I recycle, reuse & re-purpose. Thanks for your kind words on my featured poem. Oh and donate on the "Rain forest site".......
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Date: 10/3/2010 12:58:00 PM
So powerful. I hope those screams will be more and more heard. Love this. Andrea
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Date: 10/3/2010 10:52:00 AM
Jayne you just highlighted the plight of Mother earth so brilliantly. We are ignoring her cries and maybe just maybe some of us will adhere to your cries. Thank you for taking the time to comment on my work as well, love Wilma
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Date: 10/3/2010 9:23:00 AM
This is stunning Jayne, an outstanding work:) Felt this through every cell in my body, with the intensity with which it was written! A truly empathic work;)) thanks for your kind words on "Take Out" that seagull came back for seconds, by the way LOL
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Date: 10/3/2010 8:13:00 AM
good one, much enjoyed
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Date: 10/3/2010 5:49:00 AM
Very Very touchy and creative write on the earth's screams, Jayne. Very thoughtful
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Date: 10/3/2010 5:21:00 AM
enjoyed reading today...have a good day!
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Date: 10/3/2010 4:20:00 AM
Good job of describing what the planet is going through being abused...Praise God that he designed this earth to repair itself if given the opportunity until he is ready then the end will come..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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