Health Is God's Gift

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"God's Greatest Gift" From my roof top garden, 26 June 2017, my photo,

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Health is God's most precious gift of value untold That is more precious than all diamonds and gold As long as we possess it we seem not to care But as soon as we lose it we find it unfair Better would be us health more to appreciate Thanksgiving offer to God and life celebrate! © Demetrios Trifiatis 26 June 2017

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Probir Gupta

Date: 6/27/2017 5:34:00 AM

Nice couplet ... Great ...

Maria Williams

Date: 6/26/2017 7:54:00 AM

Bravo Dear Demetrios and so well said in Rhyme my friend...Maria PS keep away from the Fast Food restaurants.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/26/2017 9:08:00 AM

I have been abstaining from FFR for decades my friend, Maria! Thank you for your visit and your lovely advice!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/26/2017 3:44:00 AM

- I agree with this beautiful line : "That is more precious than all diamonds and gold" - Health is the most important thing we have ... especially when the age comes - Lovely written, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/26/2017 4:57:00 AM

You understand better than anyone else my friend, Anne-Lise for you take care of those who suffer! Thank you for visiting and commenting in such a lovely way!

John Hardison

Date: 6/26/2017 3:16:00 AM

You have captured rhyme very well. Still recovering from a long illness (pneumonia and unable to swallow solids ) I much appreciate its message. Peace, Love and Joy

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/26/2017 4:56:00 AM

My friend, John, I wish you speedy recovery! You see I have passed pneumonia and typhus and cancer so I understand you very well my friend! Thank you for your visit!