Anil Deo Poet Rhyme

Heads Down Heads Up

I
We forget, days go by
We forget to gaze at sky

II
We are so earth-bound, non-birds
We see level, ground level, as words
Made for learning, learning theory, that is
Bound in text, texting, books, libraries

III
I learn to remind myself to look at sky
If u can't see skies easily, look high!
Trees will do, even thorns. If there are hills
Do gaze. Amaze you: mood lifts, soul trills

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Bernardo F. Asuncion May 7, 2022 at 5:42 PM A well executed poem.

Bill Baker May 7, 2022 at 5:19 PM I enjoy this poem, Anil. We should learn to look up more. Shalom shalom, Bill

I Am Anaya May 6, 2022 at 7:10 PM Anil, you are the mench. I counted...yes I counted 6 menches, 3 stooges, and 1 ugly one! Look up, I love the bird shows, they fly in formation! Anil Deo May 6, 2022 at 7:25 PM I Am Anaya. Peace and shalom Dear One. I receive your encouragement with open arms ( and in awe. ThanX in Our Grandfather Spirit, One Love)

Victor Buhagiar May 6, 2022 at 9:33 AM You gave me a good advice. Alas living alone I spend my time at home. Anil Deo May 6, 2022 at 12:17 PM You are too kind to thank me. Jesus helps believers get ideas to stay healthy or in faith. But thanX & shalom Shalom dear Friend & Malta Poet