Head On Bed Collision

Asleep before the head hits the pillow Head filled with vivid colors swirling, amassing, mixing outside the lines Transgressions grow skyward like a bean stalk becoming a giant Worries wander aimlessly like a cat in the night looking for a spoon Hurts pound again, and again, first a drumstick then a sledge hammer The kaleidoscope of confusion rotates ever faster, bed spins counter Places cannot be escaped Faces stare as if clothes have been robbed Running, Flying, Drowning, Suffocating, Garbling Words, Can’t Breath, Slow Motion, Falling, Insatiable Hunger, Unquenchable Thirst, Blood Stained, Shouting Loaded Down, Frantically Searching Pockets, Hidden Underneath, Forgotten Fear. All fears. Nothing but fear. Afraid. Regret. Worry. I didn’t. I really did! Each day we pack our pockets. Cram our purses. Load our backpacks Hang needless objects and things around our necks, over our shoulders, in the crux of our elbows, on our belts Grip suitcases. Carry stuffed plastic grocery bags on each knuckle. Waddling to the side of the bed before crashing head on Unknowingly still pinching the key between our left thumb and pointer finger Hitting the bed with a massive crash every part of the day strewn around the room like a devastating mid air explosion of a 747 littering debris, miles and miles of destruction, charred remnants, unidentifiable and randomly placed objects, out of place, disfigured, often never found
Before your head hits the pillow Drop the things you picked up today Take a load off Free yourself of your burdens Neatly set everything aside On second thought, just pile it and let it lay where it falls Drop your yoke Sit down on the foot of the bed with God Hand Him the things you still cling within sweating red fists Briefly Examen your day Fall asleep on His shoulder He will gently lay your head on the pillow, loft your feet off the floor, and tuck you in. Let Him carry your burdens, lighten your load, unpack, empty your pockets, wash your laundry, even sort and match the socks. Travel to sleep lightly and peacefully dreaming of a new day carrying nothing but what is truly needed.

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Date: 10/18/2017 5:33:00 AM
Hi Michael. Congratulations on for your place in my contest. I am not really a God person. Your poem is so beautifully crafted however and speaks so much. Well done, Kai
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Michael Vacek
Date: 10/24/2017 11:13:00 PM
Thank you. God can be many different things to many people. I appreciate your ability to look past the differences we might have to recognize the beauty in my poem. I truly believe that the meaning of life is to love as much as we can and recognize beauty as often as possible. Thanks again for sponsoring the contest
Date: 10/16/2017 1:10:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Michael.
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Michael Vacek
Date: 10/16/2017 1:25:00 PM
Thank you Agnes.
Date: 10/14/2017 8:08:00 AM
Michael, I love this poem of surrendering and offering everything up to God; the good , the bad and the ugly. Such a magnificent write, entrancing from the first line till the last. Powerful in truths, poetic expression and imagery. Congratulations on your well-deserved win!
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Michael Vacek
Date: 10/14/2017 9:12:00 AM
God always seems to hand your bag back in the morning a little lighter. Thanks for you comment.
Date: 10/13/2017 10:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Michael - and a wonderful write, my friend! :-)
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Michael Vacek
Date: 10/13/2017 10:31:00 PM
Thank you Gregory
Date: 10/13/2017 3:52:00 PM
Nicely done, Michael, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Michael Vacek
Date: 10/13/2017 8:34:00 PM
Thank you Eve
Date: 10/13/2017 12:21:00 PM
Wow a meaningful jam packed powerful poem, that demands your total concentration, but is worth the read. Congrats Michael for a great win!
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Michael Vacek
Date: 10/13/2017 12:58:00 PM
Thanks John I. Did get a little long-winded...sorry about that.
Date: 9/19/2017 6:33:00 PM
You really wrote what many folks go through! Wonderful similes and images.
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Michael Vacek
Date: 10/13/2017 3:02:00 PM
Thank yo for the compliment
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