Head Down Eyelids Closed Dreaming of My Piano Lesson

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I lay my head upon my ivory pillow;
Playing the chords of my life so busy;
Eyelids closed dreaming of my lesson;
Nightmares flow my concert confessions;

Eyelids closed dreaming of my piano lesson;

HEAD DOWN EYELIDS CLOSED DREAMING OF MY PIANO LESSON I lay my head upon my ivory pillow; Playing the chords of my life so busy; Eyelids closed dreaming of my lesson; Nightmares flow my concert confessions; As I lay upon my notes; Sleeping snoring songs; Sometime today I'll arise; Alas!, black N white keys; Do now ever so support me; Dreaming of my 1st concert; Applause! My muse is a perfect presents; So sound asleep I know you'll love this; Sonata resonates keys and beauty notes; Practiced and played so hard my dreams; Those dreams of exposure I lay out my composition; Eyelids closed dreaming of my piano lesson; 11/3/18 Tell Me A Story 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brenda Chiri

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Curtis Moorman

Date: 11/9/2018 1:37:00 PM

Well said, My Brother! Children are special and finding one in a pose such as this shows just how innocent they are. Great write, James! Congratulations on your win.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/9/2018 5:58:00 AM

Hi James, dropping by with my congratulations on your win in the contest. Much deserved my friend....Mike

James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 11/22/2018 12:54:00 AM

Thanks Vladislav, I appreciate you. Thanks for reading James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2018 6:44:00 PM

This is a darling poem, Edward. Congrats to you on your great win!

James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 11/22/2018 12:52:00 AM

Greetings, Andrea and thanks glad you enjoyed my verse. ~~James