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He Went To College

he went to college 'pon borrowed money played wild... reaps remorse four-fold Sponsor: Black Eyed Susan Contest:Senryu/Any Subject This 24 day of May, 2013 Only one Senryu

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Poet. Undertaker

Date: 6/19/2013 2:48:00 AM

great poem

Donna Jones

Date: 6/8/2013 9:54:00 AM

Oh often the case! Good one Sara....congratulations

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2013 8:56:00 PM

congratulations on your win, Sara. How have you been, sweet lady?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/4/2013 10:43:00 PM

Sara, enjoyed your senryu. Congrats!! In Susan's contest... xox~ Linda

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 6/4/2013 10:41:00 PM

oh, excellent warning poem Sara, it pays to have a stake in the games, congratulations on your win!

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/4/2013 1:51:00 PM

Another great poem from you, Sara....clever senryu!!

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/4/2013 10:46:00 AM

Congratulation on your win, my friend. Loved always,bl

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/4/2013 10:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning place Sara xx

Tim B

Date: 5/24/2013 8:18:00 PM

How very poignant and painful. So many a young man has this folly followed. This one strikes close to home :) Great poem Sara.

Jack Horne

Date: 5/24/2013 3:06:00 PM

yes, this would apply to many, I bet. congrats on your wins, my friend

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/24/2013 9:06:00 AM

This is an intriguing write, different than your usual poetry! This poem is surely true, some people go to college to party and have fun and don't do what they are there to do...and the money is wasted, and they fail their classes! I've seen it before, I know how it affects people! You have written a tremendous poem here my friend! What an amazing piece, Great Work!!