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He Was So Pure

The blacksmith's call came in last night Startled from bed and full of fright Pressed into service, make a sword Adorn it, sharp, they'll live no more Sweat on his brow, he worked all night Pleased his swords were his delight He set the jewels, for extra measure I must honor the master, 'tis for his pleasure Finishing touches, the master arrived He paid his wage, his eyes gleamed wide A long road, then, atop the hill He drew the sword, held high and still He pierced His side, now death for sure And then came forth a blood so pure

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Date: 5/27/2012 12:41:00 PM
Amy, very cool, I like this a lot, good imagery..David
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