He Was Just a Little Boy

I was born unto this world
A little boy called James
I was just like all the rest
Who in the playground played normal games

I knew my life was in trouble
By the time I reached the age of five
My mother had so many friends
I wondered why I was alive

The kids all used to laugh at me
In my short trousers and bloodied knees
If only they had known
What was going on, in the inside of me

Would they ever know
Why a mother would put you down
And pretend that your not there
As another arrives from out of town

Have they ever wondered
To go to school with clothes unwashed
Sleep on a concrete floor
While your Mother's comfortably sloshed

Do they ever stop and wonder
What happens around them day by day
They can't, because they are young like me
When all they want to do is play

My teens are around the corner
To secondary school I go
I survive and I get wiser
As I intend my life to flow

As we travel down life's highways
When we are born they are seldom written
You know the roads you want to take
For inside you, your internally smitten

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/24/2010 4:55:00 PM
this is very sad i love my children and cant imagine ever treating them this way my heart goes out to you and others who have had to endure anything like this,but writing about things that have happened does help ,doesnt it.
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Date: 5/20/2010 2:22:00 PM
A great write; we walked the same path. I grew up in a biggoted little town. My Mom ignored me, too, but not the town; I was crowned "Miss dirty little princess of po' white trash" when little. Had to sneak out to beg for dimes just to buy ice cream. Mama would never waste money like that. I did piecework at home from when I was 8 until I married. Had no friends 'cause I had to stay in and work as a kid. I wore un-ironed dresses to school and was avoided by my class mates. Such is life! Patty
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Date: 5/11/2010 6:49:00 AM
James this poems' title haunts me as well as much of the content except for mother. I keep coming back to re-read it. Deja Vu all over again. Well done. JT
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Date: 5/11/2010 3:58:00 AM
A poem which moves the heart Mr. Fraser...as poets we have though our pen and slip on to which..we may cleave...or cleave ! Great poesy Sir ! I truly admire the artist who leaves the run of oil and has the awesome ability to become caprice with the mark which is left ! james
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Date: 5/9/2010 4:00:00 PM
One to ponder here, James. I don't know that we are ever really "in control" ... too much outside interference be it school, job, marriage, divorce (LOL) etc. etc. and then watching our own kids grow up and the cycles continue .... or change the roads anyway ... smile ...
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Date: 5/9/2010 6:02:00 AM
A write with different passion, well done James, thanks for the return of my comment, have yourself a nice one today,..p..d
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Date: 5/9/2010 3:12:00 AM
James, this situation is terrible for the child...The mother could(not always) is in hell herself...I feel for the children of the world for whatever reason get the worst out of life...It ruins their childhood and for so many it ruins their adulthood and probably their future generations....Sara
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Date: 5/9/2010 2:00:00 AM
Thought provoking..I love the last line! - Best, Karen
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