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He Was Aging Gracefully

Onlookers remarked that he was aging gracefully His disposition so sunny, cheerful, upbeat Making plans for the future with his sweetheart Taking such pride in his many grandchildren True, he moved tentatively, pausing more and more often to rest, breathing in fits and spasms, and betimes his sentences trailed off into the vapor of the distant past Then too there were the conversations where you needed to repeat and repeat yourself, again and again, before he would finally get it -- But oh, that infectious, wide smile which broke out on his face when he did get it! Ah, that was a smile well worth waiting for, indeed -- a smile that brought comfort and peace to all those around him... ...Who were all the more confounded when he turned inward, shaking his head, mumbling to himself as cane-aided, he shuffled and stumbled his way home 'midst the sea of disapproving faces

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Date: 1/13/2019 3:53:00 PM
'a smile well worth waiting for' - what an uplifting line, then the fall, this is complex and layered-
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Date: 1/13/2019 7:32:00 PM
Michelle, thank you for your uplifting comments! :) gw
Date: 1/9/2019 2:54:00 PM
well done, gershon! sad, to me, as well. i guess if we live to a certain age, this is inevitable for most of us, though...
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Date: 1/9/2019 3:29:00 PM
Yeah, I guess so...I really admire those who never let a drop of bitterness cross their tongues or penetrate their thoughts. They are real heroes---pleasant, cheerful, and (usually) concerned for 'he other' till the end. Thank you so much for the feedback and support, Ilene. :) gw
Date: 1/9/2019 1:51:00 PM
Yet many disapprove, why ? It's something that will eventually come to us all. Well written Gershon. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/9/2019 2:04:00 PM
Good question, my friend, at least from the vantage point of age...I live with a wife 7 years my junior and a son who is 46 years my junior...And from their vantage point, well... you've read the poem...there's a slight autobiographical flavor to it....Best always, Tom. ~ Gershon
Date: 1/9/2019 1:43:00 PM
Very nice poem! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/9/2019 2:02:00 PM
Thank you so much for you feedback and encouragement, Valerie! Best wishes, Gershon

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