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He Walked In Solitude

He walked in solitude along a stretch of shore Head bowed, listening to the incoming tide, Remembering the filmy silk cover-up she wore, That day when he could ask for nothing more, He’d asked for her hand in marriage with pride He walked in solitude along a stretch of shore. Now she had become part of his life’s lore, He recalled a seashell she collected as a bride Remembering the filmy silk cover-up she wore. Losing her wounded him in his innermost core He felt her loss intensely with each stride, He walked in solitude along a stretch of shore. For her to return to him, he would deeply implore While knowing it could not be, for she had died Remembering the filmy silk cover-up she wore. So, he searched in meditation for an elusive door Uniting their souls eternally, as they felt inside, He walked in solitude along a stretch of shore Remembering the filmy silk cover-up she wore.
Written October 31, 2022

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Date: 11/11/2022 8:50:00 PM
This is also an example of third person villanelle, right? Poignant poem, Milt...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/12/2022 8:58:00 AM
Thank you, Jo. Yes, it is an example of third person villanelle.
Date: 10/31/2022 1:59:00 PM
A bittersweet scenario, alone with his thoughts in a tranquil place but still able to connect with the love of his life no longer with him. He feels pain but also great joy. Well written Milton. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/31/2022 9:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tom. As the time of the year approaches when I lost Deb, I tend to get melancholy and write more of these types of poems. I'm going to try to tamp it down this year. I need to keep moving on.
Date: 10/31/2022 12:59:00 PM
So delicate, romantic and pretty Hank. Wow!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/31/2022 9:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Caren. I really appreciate it.

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