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He Takes My Breath Away

He reads my mind not intentionally but casually saying what I was going to say Deep prophetic hazel eyes full of golds and glimpses of green Deja Vu and soul travel has never felt this solid or complete I cannot look past him We both smile Laughter in our eyes first It thunders through the room at breakneck speed We are redundant he says Fifty years of redundant. He still takes my breath away

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/8/2019 8:57:00 PM

Sweet, sweeter, sweetest. You are each so fortunate. (I'm a tad jealous; had my first marriage survived, it would be 44 years this summer... Oh, well. I'm lucky I got a second chance is all). Blessings, sister Caren. ~ Gershon

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/8/2019 11:35:00 PM

Yes, indeed, but he did tell Miss Kneeland the first grade/second grade teacher "when I grow up I am going to marry her," making me HATE him for a long time. I was never going to marry a BOY!