He Shall Be Heard

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In the midst of the night's calm and darkness, I fell asleep. And everything else that is clear is the stars and his weep. And the flow of a mail sends impulses of love into his blood. He adjusts his head and takes an extra glance at the flood. He scribbled down a path there, hungering for just an idea. One of the meanings overloaded through photographs area. Perhaps the concern and stress will pass, but that will satisfy. With what he meets the child in the distance, he is unhappy.

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/22/2021 1:41:00 AM

You are so great at couplets - you are the master. I bow to this one and Trixie, my aggressive muse is clapping and waving her pompoms.

Sotto Poet
Date: 3/22/2021 11:42:00 AM

You seem to have a lot of energy and are lifting your arms in excitement. That`s a new poem profound idea that could be a great couplet; we should try it and share it. Thanks, Caren, for your sweet words.