He Rides Alone This Life

He Rides Alone This Life


He rode alone into this life
abandoned in its infancy
endured the slash of venom’s knife
endured the pain that set him free

from those who hid behind the robe
while claiming they were free of sin
and mocked the very truth they served
while claiming to be godly men.

Thus did he fight the demon’s lies
in alleyways of nights, twice dark
upon a steed that daily dies
at sunrise melody of lark

upon a branch enticing him
to steel his heart and fight again
the shadows that encase his heart
the shadows he must not let win.

So does he battle every day
robed demons of that long past fray
when overwhelmed he was betrayed
a gentler spirit slow decayed.

Defiantly he guides old hate
protects the joy of infancy
endures the slash of venom’s knife
endures the pain that sets him free.


Submited to Structured Forms – Iambic verse III
Sponsor – Giorgio A.V.
John G. Lawless
10/2/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 5:33 AM
Interesting poem, congrats on the win, John
Lawless Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 5:44 AM
Your comment is appreciated Dr. Mehta
Richards Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 10:07 AM
Two outstanding lines, that sum this up...."Defiantly he guides old hate....protects the joy of infancy"...... Wow..... amazing and intense is this !! Well done, John!
Lawless Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 6:12 PM
Thank you Carrie. There are some wounds that never heal and some offenses that defy forgiveness.
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 8:09 PM
Wow a very powerful poem John. Your poem flowed with perfect rhythm. Congratulations on your win.
Lawless Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 7:24 AM
Thank you Brenda, not a pleasant topic but a recurring one. Always appreciate your input and comments.
Eastman Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 10:05 AM
A very interesting and thoughtful piece. It flowed wonderfully, too.
Lawless Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 4:16 PM
Thank you Carol.
Thirtyseven Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 1:13 AM
A wonderful smooth read. Rhythmic indeed. You deal with some very dark situations, and devilish intentions. The outcome is moving in its read. I would also like to thank you for your comment on my "Flinders Poem", I have posted a reply. Feel free to request anymore details. Cheers mate, Scott
Lawless Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 4:16 PM
thanks for reading and for you generous comment Scott
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