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02/14/25

Bill gives wife flowers anticipating his kiss Sue’s ruby lips part she bursts into tears the red roses are plastic Sue screams "YOU MISER!" Bill tries to tell her bouquet shows his endless love… Sue refuses sex!

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Date: 3/19/2025 11:38:00 AM
Haha omg i can imagine! I feel sorry for men on valentines day having to do so much to prove their love, but iv never seen anyone give plastic ones bet that would be quite a scene. The last line says it all! Made me smile. In need of some humor so just read this too! Love how you always come up with these
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Date: 2/23/2025 9:47:00 PM
Jan I needed to read this hilarious write this morning. I enjoyed it immensely. Hope you are well. My one eye is healing from a cataract op. My second eyes is a week later which is this Thursday . Love and hugs Jennifer.
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Date: 2/15/2025 3:36:00 PM
Ha. She is so finicky
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Date: 2/15/2025 10:16:00 AM
Lol, Will she file for divorce, Nicely done Jan
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Date: 2/15/2025 9:28:00 AM
Bill deserves to be in the doghouse, Jan, or is it the outhouse?
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Date: 2/15/2025 4:36:00 AM
Epic fail! I wouldn’t fall for that either…lol
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Date: 2/15/2025 4:13:00 AM
These things should never be transactional. Haha Tom's comment wins :)
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Date: 2/14/2025 10:45:00 PM
She should buy him a blow up doll if he likes plastic so much lol. Enjoy your weekend Jan. Tom
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/15/2025 9:26:00 AM
oh my... what a perfect comment, Tom! On second thought... nah He might like that doll a titch too much.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/15/2025 4:36:00 AM
That is funny…lol, Tom ~ Kim
Date: 2/14/2025 5:21:00 PM
LOL. Good one. Not sure if he was dumb or she expected more from him. Either way he lost
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