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02/14/25

He really Cocked Up on Valentine’s Day


 

Bill gives wife flowers anticipating his kiss Sue’s ruby lips part she bursts into tears the red roses are plastic Sue screams "YOU MISER!" Bill tries to tell her bouquet shows his endless love… Sue refuses sex!
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Empress Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 11:38 AM
Haha omg i can imagine! I feel sorry for men on valentines day having to do so much to prove their love, but iv never seen anyone give plastic ones bet that would be quite a scene. The last line says it all! Made me smile. In need of some humor so just read this too! Love how you always come up with these
Proxenos Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 9:47 PM
Jan I needed to read this hilarious write this morning. I enjoyed it immensely. Hope you are well. My one eye is healing from a cataract op. My second eyes is a week later which is this Thursday . Love and hugs Jennifer.
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 3:36 PM
Ha. She is so finicky
May Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 10:16 AM
Lol, Will she file for divorce, Nicely done Jan
Lane Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 9:28 AM
Bill deserves to be in the doghouse, Jan, or is it the outhouse?
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 4:36 AM
Epic fail! I wouldn’t fall for that either…lol
Cunningham Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 10:45 PM
She should buy him a blow up doll if he likes plastic so much lol. Enjoy your weekend Jan. Tom
Lane Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 9:26 AM
oh my... what a perfect comment, Tom! On second thought... nah He might like that doll a titch too much.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 4:36 AM
That is funny…lol, Tom ~ Kim
Mckeithan Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 5:21 PM
LOL. Good one. Not sure if he was dumb or she expected more from him. Either way he lost
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