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He Loves Her - He Loves Her Not - An Echo Poem With Brian Johnston

He Loves Her? He Loves Her Not? – An Echo Poem By Darren White and Brian Johnston Darren White’s Original Poem – WHAT LOVE LOOKS LIKE PoetrySoup.com - Reprinted with permission “If anyone asks you how the perfect satisfaction of all our sexual wanting will look, lift your face and say, Like this.” - Rumi *** Darren: I lift my face to you, my anyone my only one, my love, And see your question unspoken but screamed all over you This is what love looks like What it looks like with only that one person I see you read you every line of you words without any meaning full of meaning I read you I see your face I taste the sun and the moon and all the stars in all the fireworks. Darren White *** Brian Johnston’s Echo - I Do Not Doubt That Love Is Real PoetrySoup.com and PoemHunter.com I do not doubt that love is real, Just shy to offer up myself As shining gem that you might steal Or place in glass case on a shelf, Holding to the selfish view That somehow I am just for you. I know I cannot love like that There is not ONE that I desire My temperament is more like cat, But, looking still, I don’t conspire To say that I cannot be yours… Just “Love” is not that which secures. I doubt that Rumi showed his face, To only one and kept this vow, For “sexual wanting” has no place, No love it may not disavow “Like this” is just a moment’s urge And untoward thoughts may quickly purge. In love though lives a higher plane, Where jealousy is just fool’s gold And even dolts like me can gain By seeing it is just blindfold! Integrity’s your only friend, It might just save you in the end. For sun and moon and stars all fade, Like vows that promise you’re the one, Like promises made in the shade, The truth will out though your heart’s won, So chose a mate beloved by folk, Don’t let your future be a joke. *** Brian Johnston April 9, 2017

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Date: 4/15/2017 2:46:00 PM
This is a cool collaboration :) I love the different points of view. <3
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Date: 4/12/2017 2:01:00 PM
Two exceptional masterpieces speaking volumes..A definite fave..and btw I love Rumi too.
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Darren White
Date: 4/12/2017 2:14:00 PM
Rumi, Hafiz, they are such excellent sources of inspiration, such wonderful thinkers :) And thank you very much my friend!
Date: 4/12/2017 1:12:00 PM
Really nice, these two compliment each other wonderfully. You never cease to amaze me Darren and now with the addition of Brian's work, I am amazed. Great job both poets.
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Darren White
Date: 4/12/2017 1:28:00 PM
Thanks Chris :) This was fun to do, and completely different than other collaborations I am used to do, where we write poems together. I liked it!
Date: 4/12/2017 1:11:00 PM
Three interested perspectives all colliding poetically to answer unanswerable questions. Great job you two (and Rumi). So, you figured out what love looks like, now you wanna tell us what it is?
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Darren White
Date: 4/12/2017 1:26:00 PM
Hello, you there :) We have to thank Rumi for this. Without those few lines, I wouldn't have written that little poem and we wouldn't have that collaboration now. Love looks like the simplest thing on earth, like nothing special, and still...
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 4/12/2017 1:11:00 PM
By interested I meant interesting, btw

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