He Is Dead-Alive

He has a miserable life, she said, and he has exposed his meanness to lots of others.
He sits in a large chair, with a pee cup by his side, angry and alone. The relatives do not visit.
He has not read a book since high school, he has learned nothing new, he has contributed nothing to society.
He is truly dead-alive, she said. Alive, but truly and completely one hundred percent dead inside, and to the world.
 
I sat and listened with my mouth agape, wondering that she could speak this way of her brother.
That is not all, she said. He weighs a jillion pounds, his home is smelly and terrible, completely foul,
Our own mother would have given up on him, and she did not ever give up on people.
He sits in gruesome-smelling diapers for days, there is a pile of them in the corner.
 
Which corner? I asked her.
How would I know? She asked.  We have not spoken for fifty years.
Mesmerized, I wondered what he was saying about her.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/21/2018 1:28:00 PM
Too true, I often wonder what the other side of the story is, this is so descriptive!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/21/2018 8:41:00 PM
I sat in shock as she spouted this out to me.
Date: 9/20/2018 10:27:00 PM
Wow. That ending said it all... very powerful write!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/21/2018 12:28:00 AM
This scenario unfolded this very morn.
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