Get Your Premium Membership

He Haunts the Back Streets

He haunts the back streets hugging the sides of buildings Unseen, unfelt, unloved a statistic in a dusty cabinet file Raising up on sole-less shoes He sneaks a view from the alley ice on every windowpane conversations mixing with steam He slinks to the edge of town to the bridge o'er the rushing river Would God care if he took his life ~ his lips involuntarily quivered

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/26/2021 7:35:00 PM
Hello Gershon ... certainly a sad poem. Often I wonder how people in a situation like this survive in winter - thank you Gershon - Lindsay
Login to Reply
Wolf Avatar
Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/27/2021 7:14:00 PM
You know, many don't. I always look to see how many of the beggars at a certain intersection near me don't come back the next year. Others do come back. They tell me 'This one and that one didn't make it.' Capitalism's darker side. ~ Not a socialist, but...
Date: 11/24/2021 10:26:00 PM
This poem reflects a side most hope none ever see.
Login to Reply
Wolf Avatar
Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/27/2021 7:13:00 PM
Yeah, and when we see it, we avert our eyes...
Date: 11/23/2021 8:01:00 PM
So sad ! Such scenes will haunt us for long ! Definitely the one born in the manger will care... ! Who else? Powerfully presented Gershon !
Login to Reply
Wolf Avatar
Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/23/2021 8:17:00 PM
Thank you for (all of) the encouragement, Valsa. Here's to Daylight and Delight, Gershon
Date: 11/23/2021 7:56:00 PM
There for the grace of God go we, thankfully. Bless all the homeless, pray for their prosperity… Belle
Login to Reply
Wolf Avatar
Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/23/2021 8:16:00 PM
That's what I say: Pretty paper, pretty pencils of blue... ~ Willie Nelson
Date: 11/23/2021 1:36:00 PM
Sole-less shoes…soulless perhaps…that question Would God care…really wants to know if he’s there. Great work, Gershon!
Login to Reply
Wolf Avatar
Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/23/2021 3:14:00 PM
I think He cares, especially about the Widow, the Orphan, the Stranger, and the Poor. He is their de facto Father. Blessings, gw
Date: 11/23/2021 11:08:00 AM
If we are to believe psychics, earth is crawling with souls creeping around in search of another way out of their misery other than becoming responsible for their own thoughts and actions . . . .
Login to Reply
Wolf Avatar
Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/23/2021 3:05:00 PM
That is, of course, a fairly big if... believing in Psychics, that is...
Date: 11/23/2021 9:32:00 AM
...and yet to most who see him/her they are invisible....
Login to Reply
Wolf Avatar
Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/23/2021 3:05:00 PM
Invisibility has its disadvantages, doesn't it? ~ M.J.
Date: 11/23/2021 5:29:00 AM
WoW! Gershon, What a deep and heart-stirring write. You painted such a melancholy image with your words. In my opinion, God would care. Well done my friend-Alexis
Login to Reply
Wolf Avatar
Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/23/2021 3:03:00 PM
I think that God would care too, Alexis. After all, He is the Father of the Widow, the Orphan, the Stranger --- and the Poor! When they are happy, so is He! Season's best, Gershon
Date: 11/23/2021 1:38:00 AM
This is such a sad piece Gershon and all too true for many who people turn away from because they don't wish to see their plight. Well done. God Bless, JB
Login to Reply
Wolf Avatar
Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/23/2021 2:59:00 PM
It's true. Most people turn away from such misery. Here's to happiness and health, Judy. :) gw
Date: 11/22/2021 10:41:00 PM
This is quite sad, but a truth for some who feel they have nowhere to turn. So heartfelt and well written, my friend. Best regards, Evelyn
Login to Reply
Wolf Avatar
Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/23/2021 2:58:00 PM
I guess I was pretty close to this once, a long time ago. So it's (still) felt, even if it's far away now. Joy and more Joy, Gershon

Book: Shattered Sighs