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He Gives Wings To Me

intensity grows
   those dark eyes give wings to me...
       passion flies within

willow soft lashes
    framed upon a work of art...
        masterful the gaze

lips that taste of wine
      tantalizing nectar sweet...
          cannot turn back now



By Deb Wilson
for contest"Eyes First Meet"
sponsored by Michael Falotico

Copyright © Deb Wilson | Year Posted 2011

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Paul Schneiter Date: 1/2/2015 11:48:00 PM Deb, I really like this—the flow, the imagery, the message. Wonderful! Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/4/2011 5:36:00 AM Congratulations on your win Deb in the contest "Eyes First Meet" sponsored by Michael Falotico. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 4/3/2011 7:21:00 PM just beautiful Deb, congrats on your first place win in the contest Login to Reply

Andrew Crisci Date: 4/3/2011 11:12:00 AM Congratulations on your big win in Michael's contest," When Eyes First Met." I wish you success and love. God bless and smile. Peace and Love , Andrew. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/2/2011 1:53:00 PM gosh, don't think I ever saw this one yet.I love it.No wonder it did so well! Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 4/2/2011 11:55:00 AM Congratulations on your first place win Deb ;) Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 4/2/2011 6:16:00 AM Congrats Deb on your well deserved 1st place win!Wonderful string Senryu! Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 4/2/2011 1:38:00 AM A MASTERPIECE SSRING SENRYU, Deb. So deserving on FIRST PLACE. Many congrats. Lainie Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 4/2/2011 12:56:00 AM reading this Deb, is like tasting wine, absolutely brilliant, congrats on your well deserved number one. Harry Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 4/1/2011 11:48:00 PM super congrats on your first place win, Deb-- very descriptive series of senryu, especially liked your 2nd one :) way to go for your win :D Login to Reply

Gautami Phookan Date: 4/1/2011 10:22:00 PM Congratulations on your super win, Deb. Beautiful presentation..Gautami Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 4/1/2011 9:36:00 PM Many many heartiest congrats for this uper win dear Deb. Login to Reply

Nicole Hawkins Date: 4/1/2011 5:44:00 PM There is so much said in these few short lines, the work of a true poet. Congratulations on you're win :) -Nicole Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 4/1/2011 5:34:00 PM Congratulations Deb for winning with this well written poem. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/1/2011 4:08:00 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/1/2011 3:07:00 PM Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Michael, Deb Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/1/2011 2:45:00 PM happy to share a good spot with you, deb.. APPALUSE for win! :) huggs! Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 4/1/2011 2:44:00 PM Congratulations on your deserving Ist Place win with this beauty, Deb! Love, Annalise Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/1/2011 2:29:00 PM Beautiful, Deb. Congratulations on your first-place win in Michael's contest! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/1/2011 2:14:00 PM Congrats Deb on your first place win in Michael's contest with this exciting entry ..enjoy with luv ... way to go ... Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 4/1/2011 2:10:00 PM Congrats on your 1st pace win in my contest..... luv Michael Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 3/27/2011 8:13:00 AM Alluring and inviting the first meet of eyes can be Deb. I love this piece, it sure is the best I have read for Michael's contest, good luck....:) Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/26/2011 7:03:00 PM POW and WOW Deb .. amazing powerful write ..lines communicate much emotion and passion and luv.. good luck in the contest .. truly impressive Deb.. happy weekend.. Login to Reply