Deb Wilson Poet Senryu

He Gives Wings To Me

intensity grows
   those dark eyes give wings to me...
       passion flies within

willow soft lashes
    framed upon a work of art...
        masterful the gaze

lips that taste of wine
      tantalizing nectar sweet...
          cannot turn back now



By Deb Wilson
for contest"Eyes First Meet"
sponsored by Michael Falotico

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Paul Schneiter January 2, 2015 at 11:48 PM Deb, I really like this—the flow, the imagery, the message. Wonderful!

Carol Sunshine Brown April 4, 2011 at 5:36 AM Congratulations on your win Deb in the contest "Eyes First Meet" sponsored by Michael Falotico. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts April 3, 2011 at 7:21 PM just beautiful Deb, congrats on your first place win in the contest

Andrew Crisci April 3, 2011 at 11:12 AM Congratulations on your big win in Michael's contest," When Eyes First Met." I wish you success and love. God bless and smile. Peace and Love , Andrew.

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2011 at 1:53 PM gosh, don't think I ever saw this one yet.I love it.No wonder it did so well!

Wilma Neels April 2, 2011 at 11:55 AM Congratulations on your first place win Deb ;)

Kash Poet April 2, 2011 at 6:16 AM Congrats Deb on your well deserved 1st place win!Wonderful string Senryu!

Elaine George April 2, 2011 at 1:38 AM A MASTERPIECE SSRING SENRYU, Deb. So deserving on FIRST PLACE. Many congrats. Lainie

Harry Horsman April 2, 2011 at 12:56 AM reading this Deb, is like tasting wine, absolutely brilliant, congrats on your well deserved number one. Harry

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 1, 2011 at 11:48 PM super congrats on your first place win, Deb-- very descriptive series of senryu, especially liked your 2nd one :) way to go for your win :D

Gautami Phookan April 1, 2011 at 10:22 PM Congratulations on your super win, Deb. Beautiful presentation..Gautami

Tahera Mannan April 1, 2011 at 9:36 PM Many many heartiest congrats for this uper win dear Deb.

Nicole Hawkins April 1, 2011 at 5:44 PM There is so much said in these few short lines, the work of a true poet. Congratulations on you're win :) -Nicole

Joyce Johnson April 1, 2011 at 5:34 PM Congratulations Deb for winning with this well written poem.

Sara Kendrick April 1, 2011 at 4:08 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta April 1, 2011 at 3:07 PM Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Michael, Deb

Nette Onclaud April 1, 2011 at 2:45 PM happy to share a good spot with you, deb.. APPALUSE for win! :) huggs!

Audrey Haick April 1, 2011 at 2:44 PM Congratulations on your deserving Ist Place win with this beauty, Deb! Love, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire April 1, 2011 at 2:29 PM Beautiful, Deb. Congratulations on your first-place win in Michael's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 1, 2011 at 2:14 PM Congrats Deb on your first place win in Michael's contest with this exciting entry ..enjoy with luv ... way to go ...

Michael J. Falotico April 1, 2011 at 2:10 PM Congrats on your 1st pace win in my contest..... luv Michael

James Fraser March 27, 2011 at 8:13 AM Alluring and inviting the first meet of eyes can be Deb. I love this piece, it sure is the best I have read for Michael's contest, good luck....:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 26, 2011 at 7:03 PM POW and WOW Deb .. amazing powerful write ..lines communicate much emotion and passion and luv.. good luck in the contest .. truly impressive Deb.. happy weekend..