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He Gives Wings To Me

intensity grows those dark eyes give wings to me... passion flies within willow soft lashes framed upon a work of art... masterful the gaze lips that taste of wine tantalizing nectar sweet... cannot turn back now By Deb Wilson for contest"Eyes First Meet" sponsored by Michael Falotico

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Paul Schneiter

Date: 1/2/2015 11:48:00 PM

Deb, I really like this—the flow, the imagery, the message. Wonderful!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/4/2011 5:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Deb in the contest "Eyes First Meet" sponsored by Michael Falotico. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/3/2011 7:21:00 PM

just beautiful Deb, congrats on your first place win in the contest

Andrew Crisci

Date: 4/3/2011 11:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your big win in Michael's contest," When Eyes First Met." I wish you success and love. God bless and smile. Peace and Love , Andrew.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2011 1:53:00 PM

gosh, don't think I ever saw this one yet.I love it.No wonder it did so well!

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/2/2011 11:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your first place win Deb ;)

Kash Poet

Date: 4/2/2011 6:16:00 AM

Congrats Deb on your well deserved 1st place win!Wonderful string Senryu!

Elaine George

Date: 4/2/2011 1:38:00 AM

A MASTERPIECE SSRING SENRYU, Deb. So deserving on FIRST PLACE. Many congrats. Lainie

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/2/2011 12:56:00 AM

reading this Deb, is like tasting wine, absolutely brilliant, congrats on your well deserved number one. Harry

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/1/2011 11:48:00 PM

super congrats on your first place win, Deb-- very descriptive series of senryu, especially liked your 2nd one :) way to go for your win :D

Gautami Phookan

Date: 4/1/2011 10:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your super win, Deb. Beautiful presentation..Gautami

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/1/2011 9:36:00 PM

Many many heartiest congrats for this uper win dear Deb.

Nicole Hawkins

Date: 4/1/2011 5:44:00 PM

There is so much said in these few short lines, the work of a true poet. Congratulations on you're win :) -Nicole

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/1/2011 5:34:00 PM

Congratulations Deb for winning with this well written poem.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/1/2011 4:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/1/2011 3:07:00 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Michael, Deb

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/1/2011 2:45:00 PM

happy to share a good spot with you, deb.. APPALUSE for win! :) huggs!

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/1/2011 2:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your deserving Ist Place win with this beauty, Deb! Love, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/1/2011 2:29:00 PM

Beautiful, Deb. Congratulations on your first-place win in Michael's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/1/2011 2:14:00 PM

Congrats Deb on your first place win in Michael's contest with this exciting entry ..enjoy with luv ... way to go ...

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/1/2011 2:10:00 PM

Congrats on your 1st pace win in my contest..... luv Michael

James Fraser

Date: 3/27/2011 8:13:00 AM

Alluring and inviting the first meet of eyes can be Deb. I love this piece, it sure is the best I have read for Michael's contest, good luck....:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/26/2011 7:03:00 PM

POW and WOW Deb .. amazing powerful write ..lines communicate much emotion and passion and luv.. good luck in the contest .. truly impressive Deb.. happy weekend..