He Gave

he gave up on life his body failing ~ unsure which came first posted on November 8, 2018

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Date: 11/10/2018 5:50:00 PM

Another one good and sad, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/10/2018 6:12:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Andrea.

Date: 11/9/2018 9:39:00 PM

This is so good. It seems to me they were both going down a dark road to a dead end. It was just a question which got their first.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/9/2018 10:04:00 PM

So sad when someone effuses to help themselves... before they have a problem! Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.

Date: 11/9/2018 10:19:00 AM

This is profound. Flawlessly penned, my friend!

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/9/2018 11:52:00 AM

Thanks, Rhona. Most appreciated.

Date: 11/8/2018 9:27:00 PM

How thought provoking and moving, Line. Poignantly beautiful. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/8/2018 9:29:00 PM

Thanks fro your much appreciated visit and comment, Susan.

Date: 11/8/2018 9:11:00 PM

Your senryus cannot be matched, my friend. You understand life so well.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/8/2018 9:22:00 PM

Thanks, Caren... it comes with age. LOL