Linda Alice Fowler Poet Rhyme

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He Came To Me

He came to me and said, “I love you.”
The words were soft and gentle,
barely blown across the air.

He came to me and held my hand.
A touch so soft and gentle,
I willingly left mine there.

He came to me and I saw Him.
His face so soft and gentle,
I laid my anguished heart bare.

He came to me and fed my soul.
A feast so soft and gentle,
I was grateful for the fare.

He came forth as I needed Him.
His care so soft and gentle,
I offered Him my prayer.

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Daisy Reilly December 25, 2022 at 12:07 PM The most beautiful and sewn serenely into our tapestry , our dream ... Thank you for this day and pleased to meet you Grace and thank you for this day and we are blessed in every way Our Lord whomever you may be, with you I dance every day and although our journey has not been easy ... It's okay .. Happy Christmas Linda Alice Fowler December 25, 2022 at 4:21 PM Beautifully stated Daisy! Happy Christmas! :)

Valsa George September 21, 2022 at 8:51 AM Very beautiful. Initially I thought it must be a romantic song. But when coming to the concluding lines, I understand that it is about your relationship with God, the father. Linda Alice Fowler September 21, 2022 at 1:32 PM Thank you for commenting Valsa. Linda

Victor Buhagiar September 20, 2022 at 2:43 AM This is very romantic. I loved it. Linda Alice Fowler September 20, 2022 at 5:46 AM Thank you Victor - I'm glad you found this romantic :) Linda

Sotto Poet September 19, 2022 at 5:03 PM The reader's attention is immediately captured by the first few lines of your work leaving them eager for more from Linda. A brilliant storyline and great diction. Blessings Linda Alice Fowler September 20, 2022 at 5:46 AM Many thanks Lasaad! Linda

Rico Leffanta September 19, 2022 at 11:14 AM Swept off your feet, were you? Aloha! Linda Alice Fowler September 19, 2022 at 11:57 AM I was, I was Rico. Aloha! Linda

Michael Tor September 19, 2022 at 11:08 AM So nice to read Linda uplifting and beautiful. Enjoyed reading and a favorite for me. God bless you... Linda Alice Fowler September 19, 2022 at 11:56 AM Many thanks Michael my friend. I'm honored by your words and by your fav! Linda

Jeff Kyser September 19, 2022 at 10:26 AM Linda, this is really lovely. Somewhat of a tail rhyme with refrain? Interesting! Linda Alice Fowler September 19, 2022 at 10:44 AM Thank you Jeff. I appreciate your thoughtful remarks :) Linda