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He trails the scent of sweat as he walks in, his booted footsteps loud upon the floor. A light kiss on his face gives salty taste. The feel of stubble on his chin I so adore. The lingering vanilla from his bath I next inhale as sweetly from our bed he calls to me. Salt taste is gone. Now honey is his mouth. I brush against him. . . we start leisurely. Dec. 10, 2019 for Sheri Fresonke Harper's Smell Sound Taste Touch Repeat Sense Contest

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Date: 2/12/2020 11:20:00 PM
Subtle and sensual. Congrats!
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Date: 1/11/2020 2:52:00 AM
Very romantic. Nice. Best wishes to you, Kai
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Date: 12/28/2019 5:54:00 PM
Are you sure you didn't copy this straight out of a Harlequin romance? :) lol Ooh la la. :)
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Date: 12/23/2019 8:10:00 PM
Wow... so sweetly romantic.. so true to being in love. A fine work of art my friend. A gift from your pen to every heart, still dreaming... Ann
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Date: 12/22/2019 10:19:00 AM
.."we start leisurely"....ya gotta be kidding' me......the computer broke a sweat as I read this poem.....hot, hot, hot.....
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Date: 12/21/2019 10:35:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Andrea
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Date: 12/21/2019 10:16:00 PM
Sexy--- you really bring out the senses! Congrats!
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Date: 12/21/2019 7:22:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea for your honorable mention place in the smell sound taste touch contest. I like your "HE", it is a sensual experience. Thanks for entering.
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Date: 12/13/2019 7:07:00 AM
Ah, this is poignant, sweet and full of romance Andrea!
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Date: 12/12/2019 11:16:00 PM
This is definitely going to be a winning time Andrea! I really like the way you follow the rules so subtly. Great writing my friend! : ) xxoo
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Date: 12/12/2019 8:03:00 PM
Sounds to me like some "adult fun" happened next! Very nice ????!
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Date: 12/12/2019 9:50:00 AM
All the senses beautifully depicted.. A good entry in the contest..
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Date: 12/12/2019 3:47:00 AM
WoW! This erotic poem passes the sensorial litmus test pillow easy, AD! GrEaT shortbread imagery to put in the PSoup. An instant fave to put in the Rico Suave file. Love and more love always.
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Date: 12/11/2019 12:20:00 PM
Well written Andrea, great take on the contest theme. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 12/11/2019 10:50:00 AM
Andrea, What a wonderful poem for a special man in 'He'. Note: Got to add vanilla soap to my grocery list now. Good luck on this contest with the intriguing name. -Richard
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/12/2019 7:12:00 PM
Some of it is exaggerated but my hubbie really does bathe in bubble . He insists on bubble bath and his current one is vanilla!!
Date: 12/11/2019 10:45:00 AM
this is a wonderful write Andrea...i could see the scene unfolding, the muddied shoes, the hard days work, the stubble, then the sensual traces of romance at the end of the day.... beautiful my friend, reads like a winner to me... hugs
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Date: 12/11/2019 8:36:00 AM
Nicely sensual and filled with love and desire. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 12/11/2019 7:35:00 AM
Ooh, a yumyum treat!
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Date: 12/11/2019 6:59:00 AM
A treat for all the senses, Andrea.
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Date: 12/11/2019 4:53:00 AM
Fantastic enough said...
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Date: 12/11/2019 1:33:00 AM
The words fit in perfectly Best of luck in the contest
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Date: 12/11/2019 12:43:00 AM
very sensual Andrea...beautiful! :)
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