He-Man

Always thinks that he is never good enough Never knew what family really means Tough even though people are unaware He-man is his nickname Ownage Collection was eye opening Needs to see how much he is loved Yearns to be loved for who he is Really sweet and sincere A real treasure to be around Yet he is like a son to me

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Aleera De La Keur

Date: 7/20/2009 3:05:00 AM

That's Anthony all right, great depiction.....Leerie

James Fraser

Date: 5/30/2009 7:28:00 AM

Excellent poem Kristy, he must be some guy. And your name is kool, it just runs of the tongue>James

Daver Austin

Date: 4/28/2009 6:44:00 AM

Your definition of He-Man sounds like my brother, long dead by now. The description will no doubt fit many men who show a false face. Have I read you clearly? I like your poem, Kristy. Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/27/2009 10:59:00 PM

Nice work on the He-Man, His qualities are nicely spoken of...Raul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/27/2009 10:52:00 PM

Your "He-Man" sounds like a very nice person, Kristy. Sincerity, sweetness and humility are fine qualities. Anthony Ray's lucky to have someone like you who sees all he has to offer, especially since he didn't ever have a sense of family. Great poem!