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Hazel Green

Hazel Green Of all the jewels that I possess there are two gems I love the best; of diamonds, rubies, topaz, too, and other stones of white or blue. For when into the mirror I stare I see two "living gems" so rare. Lovelier stones I've never seen than Daddy's eyes of hazel green. My dad's been gone about a year and when I need to have him near I look into the glass and see that I see him, and he sees me. And 'though it's true I miss him much to hear his voice and feel his touch, at least I have this gift so keen, my Daddy's eyes of hazel green. Honorable Mention in Brian Strand Contest

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Date: 8/27/2020 12:42:00 PM
Back to say congratulations on your podium win, Carol! So good to see your tribute on the winners list!
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 8/28/2020 9:34:00 AM
Thanks for the encouragement, Sam. I am really enjoying this Poetry Soup community. So glad I found this.
Date: 8/25/2020 3:26:00 PM
A lovely tribute in green to your father, Carol. Thank you for sharing your relationship with your dad.
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Date: 8/20/2020 4:27:00 PM
Wow I really love this!I am putting you on my fav.list and will be following your poems
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 8/21/2020 12:50:00 AM
Thanks for your encouragement, Doris. I'll be looking for your poems, too.

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