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Haywire Sleep

forty winks today elusive sleep tomorrow zombie forever Sept. 11, 2010

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De R

Date: 9/21/2011 1:45:00 PM

Yup, can totally relate to this. That's me "zombie forever". I am curious why did you put forty winks and not...let's say 60, or 30? :))

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2010 8:03:00 PM

thought I'd post on this one, since it's so fitting for me too. haha. thanks for commenting on my blog as you always do. It makes it nice to have friends we can always depend on. LUv, Andrea

Thvia Shetley

Date: 9/11/2010 3:45:00 PM

ah don't I know the feeling....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2010 11:41:00 PM

hahaha. A haiku after my own heart. Luv ya, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/10/2010 4:54:00 PM

What a beautiful afternoon to sit and read poetry here at PoetrySoup. Please keep writing and sharing your poems with us. What a diverse group of poets we have here I am so happy you are one of us Nikko. Have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/10/2010 3:39:00 PM

Hi Nikko, kung gaano kahusay sa iyo na inilalarawan dito ang kalamidad! Magkaroon ng isang magandang weekend! ....Gert:)

Jan Harvey

Date: 9/10/2010 2:58:00 PM

Those moments of rest may not delay the momentous. Enjoyed this picture, indeed. Thanks. Jan .

Date: 9/10/2010 2:21:00 PM

What an interesting perspective captured in this one. Gave me pause for reflection. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comments. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen