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Hawaiian Christmas Cheers

'Twas a week before Christmas, when at the Kalikimaka's house, I thought I heard a shout, it must be my boyfriend, quiet like a mouse. The Christmas tree was dry and had no Tylenol to survive, he ran out and was up from his chair and alive. I tried to hide, but he looked for me and I thought I was free. My boyfriend, with his coffee cup, said: "what's up"? "I'm all out of Tylenol," which was all of his talk. "Please go to the store." Where I needed to go for a walk. Leaving to a nearby store, I hurried to get some cash. The store was filled with lots of Christmas cheers, and I couldn't help notice the holiday liquors and beers. When I saw the fancy bottles and decorations insights, I thought to myself "oh what a fright". The store was festive and all I wanted was was a cheerful night. So, I named each bottles of hards: "Up with Jim, and down with Jack". Soon, I realized I didn't want him to give me, "a crack". But what's a drink without a friend, as I paused." I thought, I'll get Santa Claus. I had my eyes twinkled at him, so big with a red suit, but he was too slim. As I checked out, I came to my "Hale", and saw my boyfriend walking upwards on the "highway Pali". "Where is my Tylenol?" as he shouted to me! I forgot it with my head spinning and I couldn't see. He chuckled with a big smile and said to me, "Merry Christmas, my loving fool", where I had to sit on a very tall stool. For next year, don't be so lame, when it's wasted time and a shame! "Don't stall, I may need the "Tylenol".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/8/2013 7:33:00 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/26/2012 1:13:00 PM
an interesting narrative for the holidays. Congrats for the win with the contest of PD.
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Yolaine Armitage
Date: 12/26/2012 3:11:00 PM
I loved to penn poems and with this short story of a poem, I had to work at it...much thanks for your comments.
Date: 12/26/2012 7:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Yolaine love, all the best for the New Year xx
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Yolaine Armitage
Date: 12/26/2012 3:12:00 PM
i don't know what i won, but i do know...that i had fun with laughters in writing this poetry story! much thanks!
Date: 12/25/2012 8:56:00 PM
Yolaine Armitage , ;-) Congratulations with your little Christmas win... have a nice one... always~ PD
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Yolaine Armitage
Date: 12/26/2012 3:07:00 PM
I will say "thank you", Poet Destroyer! Happy holidays!
Date: 12/19/2012 12:00:00 PM
A nice Christmas poem, Yolaine. - Hope your Christmas will be wonderful! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Yolaine Armitage
Date: 12/26/2012 3:13:00 PM
Aloha & thank you! Glad everyone liked it for Christmas! :)

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