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A note to the wind sent on the wings of hope's demise she was the only person in my life who could make me smile ; That laughter that once rang out through the echoes of my mind is now but a faint whisper, of the joy she used to bring. Stories of yesterday, etched on the sand dunes of tomorrow what am I supposed to do, with all this sorrow? Oh wind, I feel your crisp sharp slap and sense you on ocean liners and mountain tops, have you forgotten to be gentle with wayward souls like me? Memorandum of our lives, flying towards unattainable horizons ... I feel wild without her, like an untamed you, oh wind have you seen her? Oct 30, 2022

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Date: 11/2/2022 8:39:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Vie Rose - Enjoy reading - Congratulations on your win in the contest :)
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Date: 11/2/2022 8:04:00 AM
Beautifully written I enjoyed reading this, congratulations
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Date: 11/1/2022 8:37:00 PM
This is so good, Vie. Beautifully written...and very well done. Love this! Congratulations on your placement in my contest...Charlie
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Date: 11/2/2022 2:04:00 AM
Thank you, Charles, honored that you liked it
Date: 10/31/2022 9:27:00 PM
Love this poetry that certainly goes carry on the wind, so refreshing just reading this gem. Vie. Harry
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Date: 10/31/2022 11:08:00 AM
I really enjoyed the poem you wrote, Rose. Your work has a lovely and captivating tone. Wonderful image and diction you use. Blessing dear friend
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Date: 10/31/2022 11:19:00 AM
Thank you Sotto glad you enjoyed the poem, have a wonderful day
Date: 10/31/2022 8:06:00 AM
I must be dumb. What is NW? Otherwise a beautiful poem.
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Date: 10/31/2022 11:19:00 AM
I wrote this for a contest Victor and the person who is running the contest asked that we put the initial N W beside our title, so they won't read it ahead of time, thank you for commenting, Victor,

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