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Have I Ever Told You

Have I ever told you...
    that you laugh with your eyes full of stars 
      shining brighter than the afternoon sun?
                  Darling, you ought to know
                   if you don't already know!

                    I wonder if you know... 
         that there's heaven in your every kiss.
         Every time your soft lips cling to mine,
       you breathe life into my lungs and ignite
            a powder keg of passion within me!

                  Have I ever reminded you... 
           that I could sleep forever and a day
       in your embrace? It feels just like home; 
                celestial bliss each time I rest 
                     my head on your bosom.

           Your divine secrets are far too many,
    but it's no secret that you're my raison d'etre.  
              Have I ever told you how much... 
       I love you? I do, my sweet, more than ever.
             Though I know you already know it!


Have I Ever Told You Poetry Contest (Winner: 9th Place)
Sponsored by John lawless
Date written: 11/02/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Seeker Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 6:40 AM
Superb! Congrats on this winning write!
Ibeh Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 10:01 AM
Thank you very much indeed, Seeker:-)
Lawless Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 6:33 AM
Yeah, Edward, my wife tells me that i don't tell her that enough. Nicely done and thanks for entering the contest
Ibeh Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 10:00 AM
Hey, you can always make it up with a surprise gift! Thank you so much for my placement, John!:-)
Fowler Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 5:40 AM
Sweet and lasting love...nice Edward. Congratulations on the win! Linda
Ibeh Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 9:57 AM
Thank you so much, Linda:-)
Chamberlain Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 2:09 AM
Very romantic, congratulations on your winning placement.
Ibeh Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 9:57 AM
Thank you very much, Joanna:-)
Onclaud Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 1:39 PM
charming read, edward...soupie mail urgent..huggs
Ibeh Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 2:55 PM
Thank you so much, Nette:-) I'm done with the edit, btw.
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