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Haunting Mist

Crisp breeze blows dawn dewdrops kissing cobwebs as twilight shimmers in haunting mist gold orb rays gloss too soft

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Joseph May

Date: 11/28/2023 7:23:00 AM

Very nicely penned Silent, Congrats on your win

Clifford Villalon

Date: 11/27/2023 12:09:00 AM

Congratulations Silent One! :) Cliff

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/24/2023 1:36:00 PM

This is not only haunting, it is enchanting! Congratulations! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/24/2023 7:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/24/2023 7:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful "Haunting Mist" write. I enjoyed the story you told in a few lines. Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2023 8:13:00 PM

Lovely ninette, S.O. congrats

Edward Ebbs

Date: 11/23/2023 5:24:00 PM

I really like this one Silent One, Congrats! ~ Ed

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 11/23/2023 12:22:00 PM

Awesome Silent One. Congratulations. Well deserved!

Valsa George

Date: 11/21/2023 9:53:00 PM

Such a sweet image of a dewy dawn. I visualize the beauty and magic created by the dew drops, each acting as a prism reflecting and refracting beams of light. Lovely ninette, dear Silent one.

Jude Herrick

Date: 11/21/2023 7:28:00 PM

A masterpiece webbed in ink/font/to drink whole or piece by piece !

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 11/18/2023 11:41:00 PM

My husband has been watching shows on abandoned mansions, and this fir so perfectly well with that subject. Another haunting write SO. Your poems always have such a powerful and emotional effect. An awesome write as usual!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/17/2023 10:11:00 AM

What a perfect form both visually and poetically to describe "dawn dewdrops," SO. I love seeing the magic that dewdrops create in the morning sun! This poem "shimmers" like morning's "haunting mist" illuminated by sunlight. I have a feeling this will do well. Best wishes for the contest. Thank you for this vision of beauty. Thanksgiving blessings to you!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/17/2023 9:47:00 AM

Only you could express yourself in these magical phrases to write a unique, imaginative Ninette that is hauntingly awesome. Welcome back Silent One ! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/16/2023 3:18:00 PM

Re-read this...and yes, it's similar to my "Forgotten Ghost Poem." I loved the 'kissing cobwebs" - a perfect image. Till next time, Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/16/2023 5:45:00 AM

Splendid images succinctly delivered, SO. A joy to read, my friend.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/16/2023 4:48:00 AM

SO, A very expressive and descriptive work you have penned in this one. Reads like a good contender in the contest to me. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K..A phoebe is a species of birds that come here. They build a mud dobbed nest and sometimes it contains moss. A nice bird to watch in the summer. You asked me about it in a poem I wrote.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/16/2023 1:30:00 AM

Loved the alliteration here. Also great beginning and ending.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 11/16/2023 1:04:00 AM

Oh my goodness, this is just a perfect poetic treat! Firstly, apologies for missing so many of ur poems, since I haven't been active here since the past few weeks..But coming here, on your page, ahh, I think it can inspire anyone so poetically especially if they are going through a block like myself! Your wordplay is so beautiful and enchanting, creating a mesmerizing aura for the reader! "Dawn dewdrops kissing cobwebs as twilight shimmers", "gold orb rays gloss too soft" Gosh, this is brilliant

Hiya Sharma
Date: 11/16/2023 1:05:00 AM

Wishing you good luck for the contest, I think it should do very well! One of my fav ninette poems so far, especially the creativity that you've done with 'crisp' and 'soft'.. Ahh, love that!

Ink Empress

Date: 11/15/2023 9:57:00 PM

Ah someones been writing while i was asleep i see, lolol, well silent one you struggle with short forms you said in comments? You are the one that encouraged me to try ninette two years ago and you taught so many on instagram especially island how to do these forms etc so i refuse to believe that you would struggle and look at this ninette. This is unique and very different to most written for this contest from what ive read! I am in awe of how you’ve painted imagery and written. I especially lo

Ink Empress
Date: 11/15/2023 9:59:00 PM

Kissing cobwebs! Unique! “ twilight shimmers and gold orb rays gloss! Ah well you must have a touch of alliterations evn in these forms hey. I am captivated by the way you’ve used crisp and soft too and the imagery that flows in such hauntingly stunning manner. You truly are a gifted poet! Im sure andrea will love this one. Goodluck for the contest

Mat Ignacio

Date: 11/15/2023 8:35:00 PM

a haunting ebb and flow

Paige Hind

Date: 11/15/2023 7:04:00 PM

Lovely image this creates in my mind! I can see it. Enjoyed!

Bill Baker

Date: 11/15/2023 6:18:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your Ninette, Silent one. I like you imagery. Bill

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/15/2023 4:51:00 PM

so much beauty in just a few lines, who needs anything more :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/15/2023 4:10:00 PM

Wonderful Ninette! dear SO, I like your creativity and ability to paint wonderful images. Because it lends the ethereal mist life, your title, "Hunting Mist," is intriguing. Mist revealing a road to the sun's dazzling beams and dancing with the breeze is a beautiful creation that delights. BOL with the contest

John Lawless

Date: 11/15/2023 4:08:00 PM

Beautiful visual SO I can see the dew drops dancing on the webs.