Haunting Mist

Very nicely penned Silent, Congrats on your win

Congratulations Silent One! :) Cliff

This is not only haunting, it is enchanting! Congratulations! :)

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful "Haunting Mist" write. I enjoyed the story you told in a few lines. Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........

Lovely ninette, S.O. congrats

I really like this one Silent One, Congrats! ~ Ed

Awesome Silent One. Congratulations. Well deserved!

Such a sweet image of a dewy dawn. I visualize the beauty and magic created by the dew drops, each acting as a prism reflecting and refracting beams of light. Lovely ninette, dear Silent one.

A masterpiece webbed in ink/font/to drink whole or piece by piece !

My husband has been watching shows on abandoned mansions, and this fir so perfectly well with that subject. Another haunting write SO. Your poems always have such a powerful and emotional effect. An awesome write as usual!

What a perfect form both visually and poetically to describe "dawn dewdrops," SO. I love seeing the magic that dewdrops create in the morning sun! This poem "shimmers" like morning's "haunting mist" illuminated by sunlight. I have a feeling this will do well. Best wishes for the contest. Thank you for this vision of beauty. Thanksgiving blessings to you!

Only you could express yourself in these magical phrases to write a unique, imaginative Ninette that is hauntingly awesome. Welcome back Silent One ! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Splendid images succinctly delivered, SO. A joy to read, my friend.

SO, A very expressive and descriptive work you have penned in this one. Reads like a good contender in the contest to me. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K..A phoebe is a species of birds that come here. They build a mud dobbed nest and sometimes it contains moss. A nice bird to watch in the summer. You asked me about it in a poem I wrote.

Loved the alliteration here. Also great beginning and ending.

Oh my goodness, this is just a perfect poetic treat! Firstly, apologies for missing so many of ur poems, since I haven't been active here since the past few weeks..But coming here, on your page, ahh, I think it can inspire anyone so poetically especially if they are going through a block like myself! Your wordplay is so beautiful and enchanting, creating a mesmerizing aura for the reader! "Dawn dewdrops kissing cobwebs as twilight shimmers", "gold orb rays gloss too soft" Gosh, this is brilliant

Ah someones been writing while i was asleep i see, lolol, well silent one you struggle with short forms you said in comments? You are the one that encouraged me to try ninette two years ago and you taught so many on instagram especially island how to do these forms etc so i refuse to believe that you would struggle and look at this ninette. This is unique and very different to most written for this contest from what ive read! I am in awe of how you’ve painted imagery and written. I especially lo

Lovely image this creates in my mind! I can see it. Enjoyed!

I enjoyed reading your Ninette, Silent one. I like you imagery. Bill

so much beauty in just a few lines, who needs anything more :)

Wonderful Ninette! dear SO, I like your creativity and ability to paint wonderful images. Because it lends the ethereal mist life, your title, "Hunting Mist," is intriguing. Mist revealing a road to the sun's dazzling beams and dancing with the breeze is a beautiful creation that delights. BOL with the contest

Beautiful visual SO I can see the dew drops dancing on the webs.