Haunted Woods

Behind silvery gray animus clouds, the moon does hide.
The night does cry; its heartbeat rise and falls, like the tide.
Celestial, sleepless, unbending, cold night gathered overhead,
Veiling eerie shadows, eternal time with hideous guise, dread.

Idle and dank, surrounded by broken-down fencing and gnarl skeletal tree, 
A grave “No TRESPASSING” sign forbidding entry to the beastly; 
Hangs warding off the unwanted and those had doubts, 
Only spiders spurred, floating sticky secure line hidden hereabouts.

Wind weaves through mangled limbs with howls, and spies embed
A gaunt, ghostly, hollow, hooded man, sickle in hand, in its stead; 
Reaping of life, lifting his black haunting mound shroud a ted.
Condemned, refusing to release its ghostly dead.

Strain, howling, a full moon he stands, searchingly ahead;
Pain screams rip from his throat, bones, and soft tissue bled.
A stir in the air dares to forsake, on, as he falls to his knees, unfed.
Conned the night a moment longer, blood it did crave, then fled.

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Date: 10/30/2024 4:51:00 PM
Too much spook for this kook…. I ain’t going near them woods no more. A chilly win, Eve. Enjoyed. Terry
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Date: 10/29/2024 1:29:00 AM
"A spooky night alright, to have such horror stalk the streets and woods. Enjoyed the read Eve, for Halloween… Beryl"
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Date: 10/28/2024 10:52:00 AM
Hi Eveie, what a scary tale and a dreadful killer within the haunted woods. Your imagination rife and vivid as always. Blessings and hugs. Congratulations on your wonderful placement. Jennifer.
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Date: 10/27/2024 10:19:00 PM
Striking images...of wilderness which people don't dare to trespass, populated with only spiders... and then a ghostly man! So eerie! Congratulations Eve on your high placement.
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Date: 10/27/2024 8:59:00 PM
brilliant write. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
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Date: 10/27/2024 8:12:00 AM
Eve, a great poem, spooky and clever, congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 10/23/2024 7:38:00 AM
"The night does cry; its heartbeat rise and falls, like the tide.", Very nicely done Eve
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Date: 10/21/2024 7:42:00 PM
Great job, Eve. You introduced a spooky guy toward the end. I was thinking he was the grim reaper!
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Date: 10/20/2024 2:09:00 AM
OMG this is so full of images - vividly horrific and scary. Glad he got scared away. Hugs Maria
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Date: 10/19/2024 2:34:00 AM
Brilliant and yet haunting poem, Eve. Wonder if this is for a contest.
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Date: 10/18/2024 12:13:00 PM
eerie yet charmingly scribed...that's a talent you own with much pride...now, how can I sleep? lol, huggs
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Date: 10/18/2024 4:59:00 AM
Eve, you have definitely captured the spirt of the season with your vivid lines of haunted woods! Excellent!!! Happy Friday xxoo
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Date: 10/18/2024 3:19:00 AM
I love the way youve written in such a descriptive manner dear eve. Especially the opening lines were excellent and drew me right in. I also love how youv written “ Pain screams rip from his throat, bones and soft tissue bled. A stir in the air dares to forsake, on as he falls to his knees unfed. Conned the night a moment longer, blood it did crave, then fled.” brilliant ending! Your rhymes are catchy too. Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light always
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Date: 10/18/2024 1:13:00 AM
Ooooo this is entertaining! Good luck in contest!
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