Haunted Woods

Behind silvery gray animus clouds, the moon does hide.
The night does cry; its heartbeat rise and falls, like the tide.
Celestial, sleepless, unbending, cold night gathered overhead,
Veiling eerie shadows, eternal time with hideous guise, dread.

Idle and dank, surrounded by broken-down fencing and gnarl skeletal tree, 
A grave “No TRESPASSING” sign forbidding entry to the beastly; 
Hangs warding off the unwanted and those had doubts, 
Only spiders spurred, floating sticky secure line hidden hereabouts.

Wind weaves through mangled limbs with howls, and spies embed
A gaunt, ghostly, hollow, hooded man, sickle in hand, in its stead; 
Reaping of life, lifting his black haunting mound shroud a ted.
Condemned, refusing to release its ghostly dead.

Strain, howling, a full moon he stands, searchingly ahead;
Pain screams rip from his throat, bones, and soft tissue bled.
A stir in the air dares to forsake, on, as he falls to his knees, unfed.
Conned the night a moment longer, blood it did crave, then fled.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Flood Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 4:51 PM
Too much spook for this kook…. I ain’t going near them woods no more. A chilly win, Eve. Enjoyed. Terry
Edmonds  Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 1:29 AM
"A spooky night alright, to have such horror stalk the streets and woods. Enjoyed the read Eve, for Halloween… Beryl"
Proxenos Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 10:52 AM
Hi Eveie, what a scary tale and a dreadful killer within the haunted woods. Your imagination rife and vivid as always. Blessings and hugs. Congratulations on your wonderful placement. Jennifer.
George Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 10:19 PM
Striking images...of wilderness which people don't dare to trespass, populated with only spiders... and then a ghostly man! So eerie! Congratulations Eve on your high placement.
mysore Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 8:59 PM
brilliant write. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
Kitchin Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 8:12 AM
Eve, a great poem, spooky and clever, congratulations on your winning placement.
May Avatar
October 23, 2024 at 7:38 AM
"The night does cry; its heartbeat rise and falls, like the tide.", Very nicely done Eve
Dietrich Avatar
October 21, 2024 at 7:42 PM
Great job, Eve. You introduced a spooky guy toward the end. I was thinking he was the grim reaper!
Williams Avatar
October 20, 2024 at 2:09 AM
OMG this is so full of images - vividly horrific and scary. Glad he got scared away. Hugs Maria
Buhagiar Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 2:34 AM
Brilliant and yet haunting poem, Eve. Wonder if this is for a contest.
Onclaud Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 12:13 PM
eerie yet charmingly scribed...that's a talent you own with much pride...now, how can I sleep? lol, huggs
Gentile Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 4:59 AM
Eve, you have definitely captured the spirt of the season with your vivid lines of haunted woods! Excellent!!! Happy Friday xxoo
Empress Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 3:19 AM
I love the way youve written in such a descriptive manner dear eve. Especially the opening lines were excellent and drew me right in. I also love how youv written “ Pain screams rip from his throat, bones and soft tissue bled. A stir in the air dares to forsake, on as he falls to his knees unfed. Conned the night a moment longer, blood it did crave, then fled.” brilliant ending! Your rhymes are catchy too. Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light always
Jones Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 1:13 AM
Ooooo this is entertaining! Good luck in contest!
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