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Haunted Trail

We'll walk the haunted trail tonight Lighted only by the cresent moon, Amist the piney woods The beheaded ghostmen Searches for candy, He has a mean sweet tooth. If you feel a cool chill Creeping down your spine and Smell a sweet fruit aroma... Drop your candy sack Then run, lickety split! If he doesn't get the candy... Your life he will devour!!!! **Approved by the American dental association!!

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/20/2010 3:38:00 PM

Congratulations on this HM win in the contest, Doris

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/20/2010 1:40:00 PM

This is such a funny poem, Doris. Congratulations on placing in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/20/2010 12:00:00 PM

Congrats Doris on your HM in Paula's contest with this wonderful write and win luv... a perfect piece to express the theme.. a Happy Thanksgiving to u and yours with luv my friend.. luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/31/2010 5:35:00 PM

You have me laughing, Doris, and I love the footnote at the end! But it's Halloween night now and not one trick or treater has come around. Guess I'll be eating the candy and visiting the dentist myself. LOL Love, Carolyn

Debra Eckstein

Date: 10/30/2010 4:12:00 PM

Doris cool poem thanks for all the nice comments have fun tonight and have a happy halloween. debbie eckstein

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/30/2010 3:28:00 PM

Grat spooky tale. Thank you for your comments. Loe, joyce

John Freeman

Date: 10/30/2010 3:26:00 PM

Cool job Doris, quite witty "Approve by the American Dental association!" Haaaaaaaaaaaaa! I always loved to go trick or treating when I was a child. Agape, Moses