Haunted Trail

We'll walk the haunted trail tonight
Lighted only by the cresent moon,
Amist the piney woods
The beheaded ghostmen
Searches for candy, 
He has a mean sweet tooth.

If you feel a cool chill
Creeping down your spine and
Smell a sweet fruit aroma...
Drop your candy sack
Then run, lickety split!

If he doesn't get the candy...
Your life he will devour!!!!


**Approved by the American dental association!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 11/20/2010 3:38:00 PM
Congratulations on this HM win in the contest, Doris
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Date: 11/20/2010 1:40:00 PM
This is such a funny poem, Doris. Congratulations on placing in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/20/2010 12:00:00 PM
Congrats Doris on your HM in Paula's contest with this wonderful write and win luv... a perfect piece to express the theme.. a Happy Thanksgiving to u and yours with luv my friend.. luv..
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Date: 10/31/2010 5:35:00 PM
You have me laughing, Doris, and I love the footnote at the end! But it's Halloween night now and not one trick or treater has come around. Guess I'll be eating the candy and visiting the dentist myself. LOL Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/30/2010 4:12:00 PM
Doris cool poem thanks for all the nice comments have fun tonight and have a happy halloween. debbie eckstein
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Date: 10/30/2010 3:28:00 PM
Grat spooky tale. Thank you for your comments. Loe, joyce
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Date: 10/30/2010 3:26:00 PM
Cool job Doris, quite witty "Approve by the American Dental association!" Haaaaaaaaaaaaa! I always loved to go trick or treating when I was a child. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/30/2010 12:39:00 PM
Why oh, why do you go to the woods, lol, very creepy, especially the dentist! Fun. :) Sheri
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Date: 10/30/2010 12:31:00 PM
lol. Cute and clever. Have a wonderful Halloween!
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Date: 10/30/2010 12:16:00 PM
Excellent Doris!!!! so much fun and enjoyed..Love Michael
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Date: 10/30/2010 11:48:00 AM
Good one ...If for a contest, good luck with this first place winner..Mom
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Date: 10/30/2010 11:47:00 AM
Scary stuff! Keep 'em coming! Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/30/2010 11:46:00 AM
what?funny and literary rich,another of my favourites.
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Date: 10/30/2010 10:47:00 AM
Good presentation.I enjoyed it.Fabiyas
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Date: 10/30/2010 10:21:00 AM
This is too funny, great little poem As Always, Shar
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Date: 10/30/2010 10:02:00 AM
cooll Halloween poem , love it
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