Doris Culverhouse Poet Light Verse

Haunted Trail

We'll walk the haunted trail tonight
Lighted only by the cresent moon,
Amist the piney woods
The beheaded ghostmen
Searches for candy, 
He has a mean sweet tooth.

If you feel a cool chill
Creeping down your spine and
Smell a sweet fruit aroma...
Drop your candy sack
Then run, lickety split!

If he doesn't get the candy...
Your life he will devour!!!!


**Approved by the American dental association!!

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Dr.Ram Mehta November 20, 2010 at 3:38 PM Congratulations on this HM win in the contest, Doris

Carolyn Devonshire November 20, 2010 at 1:40 PM This is such a funny poem, Doris. Congratulations on placing in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 20, 2010 at 12:00 PM Congrats Doris on your HM in Paula's contest with this wonderful write and win luv... a perfect piece to express the theme.. a Happy Thanksgiving to u and yours with luv my friend.. luv..

Carolyn Devonshire October 31, 2010 at 5:35 PM You have me laughing, Doris, and I love the footnote at the end! But it's Halloween night now and not one trick or treater has come around. Guess I'll be eating the candy and visiting the dentist myself. LOL Love, Carolyn

Debra Eckstein October 30, 2010 at 4:12 PM Doris cool poem thanks for all the nice comments have fun tonight and have a happy halloween. debbie eckstein

Joyce Johnson October 30, 2010 at 3:28 PM Grat spooky tale. Thank you for your comments. Loe, joyce

John Freeman October 30, 2010 at 3:26 PM Cool job Doris, quite witty "Approve by the American Dental association!" Haaaaaaaaaaaaa! I always loved to go trick or treating when I was a child. Agape, Moses

Sheri Fresonke Harper October 30, 2010 at 12:39 PM Why oh, why do you go to the woods, lol, very creepy, especially the dentist! Fun. :) Sheri

Kim Hilliker October 30, 2010 at 12:31 PM lol. Cute and clever. Have a wonderful Halloween!

Michael J. Falotico October 30, 2010 at 12:16 PM Excellent Doris!!!! so much fun and enjoyed..Love Michael

Sara Kendrick October 30, 2010 at 11:48 AM Good one ...If for a contest, good luck with this first place winner..Mom

Matthew Anish October 30, 2010 at 11:47 AM Scary stuff! Keep 'em coming! Yours Matthew Anish

Charles Melody Lightning Ink October 30, 2010 at 11:46 AM what?funny and literary rich,another of my favourites.

Fabiyas M V October 30, 2010 at 10:47 AM Good presentation.I enjoyed it.Fabiyas

Sharon Ruebel October 30, 2010 at 10:21 AM This is too funny, great little poem As Always, Shar

Francine Roberts October 30, 2010 at 10:02 AM cooll Halloween poem , love it