Haunted House

Startled, I woke up in a fright.
The silhouette in the mirror is there again tonight.
Peering closer, the form is ghastly;
Pinching myself, covering my head, and lastly

Counting to ten and peeking through my fingers,
It must be a ghost as his skeleton hands linger
On the latch of the bottom drawer.
His long bony fingers fling my clothes on the floor.

I squeezed my eyes shut and opened them again—what a nightmare!
His reflection bores into me as he decides what to wear.
The oval mirror is home to this spooky creep;
At his feet, my clothes are still in a heap.

Eerily, I watched as he pulled shirt after shirt over his skeleton head.
Shivers ran down my arms and I screamed “You are not real; you are dead!”
He turned around; his bony finger shook.
I gasped as he pointed and said, “How do I look?”
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Flood Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 4:19 PM
At least he didn’t say, “Does my bum look big in this?”. Enjoyed this spooky tale, Lise. Congrats on your win. Terry
Clendening Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 4:33 PM
Haha! Thank you, Terry!
mysore Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 8:49 PM
superb. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
Clendening Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 8:52 PM
Thank you, Thriveni!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 11:27 AM
Fantastic write! Congrats! Best those bones wear your very best;)
Clendening Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 12:19 PM
Haha! Thank you, Kim!
Kitchin Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 7:15 AM
Lise, I enjoyed your creepy tale, congratulations on your first place win!
Clendening Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 8:54 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words and for hosting the contest! I’m thrilled to hear that my poem “Haunted House” resonated with you. Again, thank you, Tania!
One Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 3:08 AM
Your poem establishes a spooky, suspenseful atmosphere right from the beginning with phrases like "Startled, I woke up in a fright" and "the silhouette in the mirror is there again tonight." The tone is initially one of dread and anxiety, but by the end, it shifts to a slightly comedic or absurd note with the skeleton asking, “How do I look?”
Clendening Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 6:39 AM
Thank you, Silent One!
Jones Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 8:07 PM
lol! Love it. Had me engaged entertained and eager to know the conclusion! Well done!
Clendening Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 6:39 AM
Thank you, Karen!
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