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Haunted House

Startled, I woke up in a fright. The silhouette in the mirror is there again tonight. Peering closer, the form is ghastly; Pinching myself, covering my head, and lastly Counting to ten and peeking through my fingers, It must be a ghost as his skeleton hands linger On the latch of the bottom drawer. His long bony fingers fling my clothes on the floor. I squeezed my eyes shut and opened them again—what a nightmare! His reflection bores into me as he decides what to wear. The oval mirror is home to this spooky creep; At his feet, my clothes are still in a heap. Eerily, I watched as he pulled shirt after shirt over his skeleton head. Shivers ran down my arms and I screamed “You are not real; you are dead!” He turned around; his bony finger shook. I gasped as he pointed and said, “How do I look?”

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Date: 10/30/2024 4:19:00 PM
At least he didn’t say, “Does my bum look big in this?”. Enjoyed this spooky tale, Lise. Congrats on your win. Terry
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Lise Clendening
Date: 10/30/2024 4:33:00 PM
Haha! Thank you, Terry!
Date: 10/27/2024 8:49:00 PM
superb. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
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Lise Clendening
Date: 10/27/2024 8:52:00 PM
Thank you, Thriveni!
Date: 10/27/2024 11:27:00 AM
Fantastic write! Congrats! Best those bones wear your very best;)
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Lise Clendening
Date: 10/27/2024 12:19:00 PM
Haha! Thank you, Kim!
Date: 10/27/2024 7:15:00 AM
Lise, I enjoyed your creepy tale, congratulations on your first place win!
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Lise Clendening
Date: 10/27/2024 8:54:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words and for hosting the contest! I’m thrilled to hear that my poem “Haunted House” resonated with you. Again, thank you, Tania!
Date: 10/19/2024 3:08:00 AM
Your poem establishes a spooky, suspenseful atmosphere right from the beginning with phrases like "Startled, I woke up in a fright" and "the silhouette in the mirror is there again tonight." The tone is initially one of dread and anxiety, but by the end, it shifts to a slightly comedic or absurd note with the skeleton asking, “How do I look?”
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Lise Clendening
Date: 10/19/2024 6:39:00 AM
Thank you, Silent One!
Date: 10/18/2024 8:07:00 PM
lol! Love it. Had me engaged entertained and eager to know the conclusion! Well done!
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Lise Clendening
Date: 10/19/2024 6:39:00 AM
Thank you, Karen!

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