Haunted House


In far away desolate moor of the Scottish Highland,
I was driving fast on the road around the wetland.
The car got stuck in sticky mud, I couldn’t take it out,
I was in for trouble in the wilderness, I had no doubt.

But luckily I spotted a Victorian manor not very far,
before the nightfall I could hurriedly walk up there.
Its door I knocked, an old man let me in a room stale 
that greeted me with smoke of dim lantern to inhale.

His curled lips quivered, faintly said, ”you’re hungry”,
and disappeared in the dark, closed the door swiftly,
didn’t return, I decided to explore, saw a streak of light
in a room where I found him stone still, sitting upright.

He clasped close a human skeleton with stretched arms,
said, “this is old, you’ll give me a new one with charms”.
Cold sweat rolled down my spine, shivering in the core,
I ran out of the haunted house through the back door.
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Flood Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 4:24 PM
Congrats on your bone chilling win, Subimal. Enjoyed. Terry
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 7:34 PM
Thank you for your read and comment,Terry.
mysore Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 8:50 PM
hmm. lovely write. congratulations on your win dear poet. chees.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 4:04 AM
Thank you.
Kauffman Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 11:50 AM
Love the spooky setting on the Scottish moor! Adds to the ghoulish feeling. Congratulations on your win!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 7:17 PM
Thank you for your read and comment.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 7:17 PM
Thank you for your read and comment.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 11:32 AM
Congrats, Subimal! The host not very charming! Run!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 7:16 PM
Thank you, Kim. Truly.
Kitchin Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 7:15 AM
Subimal, a great spooky tale, congratulations on your first place win!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 7:15 PM
Thank you, Tania for the placement.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 10:55 AM
Hello Subimal roy, I would run out the back door to if that was me. blessongs my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 17, 2024 at 11:32 AM
Hello Subimal, you are welcome. It is scary. blessingsd my friend. /Darlene/
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 10:55 PM
Thank you, Darlene for your read.
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