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Haunted Castle

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The dark haunted castle spread fear amongst the villagers no one dared approach at twilight. little anyone knew it was a proper den of thieves.

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Valsa George

Date: 12/1/2021 7:52:00 AM

A very clever machination ! The thieves can easily hide their booty there and stay safe away from public interference. You have given a neat twist at the end !

Karen Jones

Date: 10/13/2021 2:10:00 AM

Fun and in season. I like how versatile your writing is.

Judy Ball

Date: 10/12/2021 4:16:00 PM

Oh excellent Victor. Everyone feared the imaginary ghosts but never even new about the very real thieves. Good one. God Bless, JB

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/10/2021 7:24:00 PM

Victor, Let me give my support for the uniqueness with which you composed this post. It tells a story via the use of cunning and creativity. It's a short but exciting piece. Take care, my friend.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/10/2021 5:37:00 AM

The proper cover for thieves. Tom

Lisa Ricci

Date: 10/10/2021 4:02:00 AM

Well now Mr. Victor - Allow me to say you were most creative here with this entry. It tells a story with imagination and illusion. Have a wonderful day. Blessings always.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/9/2021 8:31:00 PM

a den of thieves , good one, Victor.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/9/2021 2:37:00 PM

Nice little scar story Victor, stay away from scary castles my dear

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/9/2021 12:07:00 PM

Maybe it was the thieves themselves who spread rumors of the castle being haunted. I enjoyed this a lot, Victor. :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/9/2021 12:02:00 PM

Smart to have word spread that this den was haunted. They probably began the rumor! I hope you are feeling well now Victor? Blessings xxoo

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/9/2021 8:30:00 AM

So a den of thieves were very wise to chose this abode. They were safely tucked away where no one not even the police would tread. Your visit to my page was awesome. Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/9/2021 5:52:00 AM

I like the turn in the end. Thieves will always find a way.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/9/2021 3:25:00 AM

Last line sets off your poem. That’s when the imagination flies! :)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/9/2021 2:42:00 AM

It’s to be hoped the thieves get the fright of their life, when the ghosts come out at night. Enjoyed the read… Belle