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Haunted By a Long-Lost Love

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High on a passing cloud there floats a dream Never to be easily forgotten, Devious destiny weaved its fierce scheme, Turned my youth into a life so rotten. The soft song of a Summer Breeze was gone, But by then we had met and love had won. How oft we trekked the hills and watched the dawn. How oft we made love, happy so well done. Carefree we roamed out our romantic days, Many noticed silhouettes in moonlight. How could I not shower her with sweet praise? Alas she had cancer, love turned to plight. The gilded leaves of autumn sigh her loss. Her funeral I bore with a harsh cross.

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/12/2021 3:28:00 AM

Beautiful love, though with a sad ending, awesome sonnet, Victor:)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/10/2021 8:09:00 PM

A beautiful nostalgic sonnet Victor, a love like yours will never die as long as on passing clouds a dream floats by… Hugs, Belle

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/10/2021 1:12:00 PM

- A heart that bleeds with longing ... so beautiful but sad, Victor - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Ball

Date: 9/10/2021 9:59:00 AM

Oh Victor. We never really get over losing a loved one. But time really will deaden the pain somewhat. Just remember the fun times and thank The Good Lord for allowing you that time together. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2021 7:11:00 AM

Oh, Victor, this is very nice. I presume you rarely write sonnets. Sorry I passed it up. I was just clicking on different poems the other day quickly and not paying attention much to the type of poems they were. You wrote your sonnet very well.The ending couplet is sad and sublime. It's the key to good sonnets, having an excellent ending couplet.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/9/2021 11:49:00 AM

Great write, Victor, she leaves on in spirit and in your heart.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/8/2021 7:21:00 PM

Carefree we roamed out our romantic days, many noticed silhouettes in the moonlight. You have written a beautiful sonnet, my friend. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/8/2021 7:41:00 AM

Love is so sweet. How dearly it is missed. God bless you, dear friend!

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/8/2021 7:38:00 AM

Victor! Your Sonnet is great with lots of beautiful lines. An elegant metaphor that clearly and powerfully conveys a great deal of feeling. Dreams float on passing clouds. Losing a loved one is painful.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 9/8/2021 7:24:00 AM

So sad to lose your loved one... A well penned Sonnet with many beautiful lines dear Victor... Have a blessed day... ~ Ani

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/8/2021 6:25:00 AM

One can feel the happiness turning to sadness, Victor, This is a beautiful poem..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/8/2021 6:02:00 AM

This is superb, Victor. Wonderfully emotive in metaphoric words: High on a passing cloud there floats a dream----The soft song of a Summer Breeze was gone...Your gifted pen shines again. Into my FAVES.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/8/2021 2:19:00 AM

So sad Victor, but she lives on in your heart and mind. Tom