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Haunted

Haunted Haunted by the way life used to be we hold to hopes that beat within our breasts and chase the ghosts of fading memory to catch a glimpse of time when youth and love, sublime together made us have the very best. Attracted by the places we once knew, we stare through clouded images to yesterday and see that what remains of then is through. With each look we move on to horizons’ coming dawn, with plans to fill each moment up in everyway. 4/1/18 Rhyme Time 1 Sponsored by: Laura Loo A-B-A-C-C-B (MAX 2 STANZAS)

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Date: 4/6/2018 3:04:00 PM
You were able to capture that haunted feeling so wonderfully in this excellent piece Sian! Congratulations on your well deserved win! : )
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Date: 4/4/2018 6:38:00 PM
I agree w/Sandra ... this is a beautiful poem, Sian! The poetic imagery is truly heartfelt haunting ... Attracted by the places we once knew, we stare through clouded images to yesterday and see that what remains of then is through. An instant fave from one of the most talented poetess on PSoup. Love and joy always.
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Date: 4/4/2018 6:45:00 PM
Btw ... was listening to the perfect haunting melody while reading this beautiful poem. "Love Theme from Pictures of the Sea" by Al DiMieola. Love and smiles. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mzxAIK5edcE
Date: 4/4/2018 5:43:00 PM
A very beautiful and well-written poem, Sian, about how our past memories haunt us. So very true. Congratulations on your fine placement on this short list of winners. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/3/2018 8:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sian, excellent write. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/3/2018 8:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Haunting and wise.
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Date: 4/3/2018 12:51:00 PM
Lovely, Sian. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 4/3/2018 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations, Sian. Beautifully written rhyme. Well done.
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Date: 4/3/2018 10:40:00 AM
many congrats on your win Sian:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/3/2018 10:26:00 AM
wow amazing words of wisdom and sagacity sweet Sian, loved your poem... thank you and congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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