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Hauling by Rowing

Written: December 12, 2023
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Twilight swallowed me, striking me speechless 
      With subtle caress of a wicked breeze 
      Stirring the surge, I drift inwardly
      And wild geese soar home in the sky.
 
Floating at a low level on a long, rolling skein. 
      Their banter ruined their afternoon
      Friends unified on a familiar trip.
      I've seen them ride on the oceans. 
      Pulling back the waves' white locks. 

In the quiet, glassy sea, my skiff barely ripples. 
      Lavender clouds and double geese.
      Random ideas diffuse as waves. 
      But my ideas act as stars in the sky
      Bringing delight with a single chuckle.

Happiness simply cannot be accounted for.
      Also, it seems as a wayward child.   
      Even amid the thrills, sadness arises.
      Akin to one drop of rain on quiet waters.
      Spread ripples will erase dazzling rays.
      With a single echoed plink of its sad note.

Is it worth staying with the wispy Hope scarf?
      Then laid across my shoulders?
      The light tilts on other days.
      That warms the day as a lover's kiss.
      And I anchor at home in delightful calm.
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Hind Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 1:30 PM
So deep; you're also a sensitive writer, Sotto. "Spread ripples will erase dazzling rays " A pleasure to read!
Pandit Avatar
December 13, 2023 at 7:02 AM
Lavender clouds and double geese. Random ideas diffuse as waves. But my ideas act as stars in the sky Bringing delight with a single chuckle--beautiful descriptions, my friend.
Empress Avatar
December 13, 2023 at 2:04 AM
Wow this must be one of my fave poems written by you: the seamless flow and descriptive lines painting such vivid imagery in such a soulful manner truly is impressive and impeccable. I especially loved “ But my ideas act as stars in the sky Bringing delight with a single chuckle.” And the oceanic lines to depict how ideas sometimes come to you through nature is so very well delivered. The way you’ve articulated each stanza too is captivating and stunning! With such meaningful thoughts. Fave
Lamoureux Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 9:50 PM
I felt like I was there. Tremendous piece my friend.
Sharma  Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 7:24 PM
Wow.. Dear Sotto, you've painted so many emotions in this mesmerising poetic tapestry, with which I can truly resonate! "Twilight swallowed me, striking me speechless" That opening line indeed left me speechless."Lavender clouds"are so enchanting too!"Even amid the thrills, sadness arises Akin to one drop of rain on quiet waters" Sigh, very true, sadness resurfaces even in the most magical moments and takes us in the flashbacks of agony..And we seem lost in the crowd.Such insightful depth here!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 7:20 PM
Free Verse, Lasaad? 'Tis-n't a Personified, --fooled me. Outings sound circa-proper, events near to reflection. Very nice free verse, my friend. Aloha, William
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