Hateful Crater

the hard oak began to splinter, sliding beneath 
worn skin. The numbing takes some of the pain away.
rivers of sweat breech  softened skin, tears glaze 
my cheek before jumping 
into the abyss. stained steel- broken 
down to spoon- mixes fluids 
into dirt.
my own melting pot.
	( I am the rabbit waiting 
	   for the strip to fade black)
both knees break free and fall into stew.
left hand loosens its grip
on the handle. landing face up reflecting a distorted
face I once called my own. the dirt begins to fall,
scattering within this  crater. No more 
stew, it’s  all dried out. wish I could see
the dawn peak its head  and say hello, but the 
mounds now cover my view. 
	take my last breath.
	    the sunlight numbs
           the pain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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