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Hate To Nurture

Have half to hang hand in hand And harp the harmless hate Then heap the hazardous haze of heartbreak And heave the ironic heroine Because the hollow horde that hovers over head Is now the narcissist on narcotics Creating nausea near the neglected one While the network of nerves brings news Of the night nitrogen seemingly never-ending So end the notorious nudge of nylon personality.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/13/2011 5:43:00 PM
A complex aliteration-full of angst. This is one of my favorite poetry styles bc in order to be effective you must have a vast vocab and awesome word power. Don't u feel like at the end of writing in this style you must come up for air? ha ha. Like the narcissist on narcotics line and the notorious nudge of nylon personality-u sure gotta be tough, don't ya? Thx, Gwendolen
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Gabrielle Wolcott
Date: 5/13/2011 5:49:00 PM
I completely agree. This style is so overpowering. <3

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