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Harvest's Gift Alouette

A new sunset creeps to wake buds..asleep from their beds of fertile clay. And morning hums speak through trees warmly reaped on fields clothed with lush display. Merrily, and lo baskets spread…aglow, with ripe fruits spilling on grounds. Neighbors line in rows till harvest- dance flows when autumn’s blessed gift abounds! Andrea Dietrich's A Lovely Alouette (Revised) Contest 9/3/2014 ~ end rhymes were used for lines 4 and 5

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Date: 9/15/2014 4:07:00 PM
A beautiful one, Nette!! Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 9/15/2014 2:59:00 PM
You brought out the joys of harvest in your lovely poem Nettie, Congratulations on your winning poem.
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Date: 9/15/2014 1:42:00 PM
Beautiful descriptive write as ever Nette:-) many congrats hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 9/11/2014 11:03:00 PM
I loved this, you have captured the mood and the season perfectly!!!
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Date: 9/5/2014 3:12:00 PM
This is a beautiful harvest Alouette, Nette! Reminds me of when still young I used to spend lots of time on my grandfather's farm; summer and autumn harvests will always stay in my mind. This is the type of write that Andrea will expect; gl in contest. hugs // paul
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Date: 9/5/2014 11:33:00 AM
The joyful mood lifts your poem off the page as the lines are read through. Cream of the crop!
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Date: 9/5/2014 8:31:00 AM
Lovely images. I like the neighbors lining in rows getting ready to harvest some fun.
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Date: 9/4/2014 11:32:00 AM
Wow sun creeps n wakes the buds asleep,, love it Nette! Sweet write a sure winner ,, good luck dear!
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Date: 9/4/2014 10:27:00 AM
Ahh!! Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 9/4/2014 9:36:00 AM
- Harvest all the gifts of nature - Beautiful autumn poem Nette ! - Good luck in the contest - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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